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I feel so hollow
I feel I am just nothing
I am getting drenched in this deep sorrow
And in my heart, I can feel my pains sing
I feel so worthless
I feel I am cursed
My mind is filled with blankness
As my map to fulfill my dreams is being crushed
I feel so lost
I feel that I am not secure
My mind is filled with haunting voices
That are making my ideas unsure
I feel so depressed
I feel very dejected
My feelings cant be expressed
With the fear of being rejected
I feel so lonely
I can feel only my presence
I talk to my inner self deeply
As nobody else could understand my silence
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Nyc vallz...but write smething other than solitude someday :)
Depression is Killing :(
nice lines.. :)
Yet again .. Guud one !
very sad .. but gud one :)
its alwaz been ur MARK :) nice1 akka
Cutie....Even I'm hoping for the same..:)
winds of time...Yeah depression is killing...ThanQ :)
Smiley....ThanQ :)
Dimps.....ThanQ :)
Keerthana....ThanQ :)
Nice One ;)
Nice Pictures..
Well Written
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ilanti sad poems inko sari rasthe nee blogger ninnu post cheyadaniki permission ivva kudadu... :P
bagundammai...kani...
Hey Siri,
Try "Power of Positive Thinking" by Vincent Peale. I just started reading from 1 week . I feel like I changed a bit. Hope it works for you too..
Note: Considering you are in Depressed Mood or lost somewhere ..
Takecare,
*M*
Cherry...ThanQ
Moonshine...ThanQ
Kiran...He he...try chesta...sad poems nunchi bayata padataniki...:D
ThanQ =]
Anonymous (Maruthi)..I'll try that..:)
ThanQ for your suggestion
wowwwwwwwwwwwwww yaar tum bhe kamal ho i love da way u express ur thoughts :P keep da gud work sweety
Thanks for the read Pari..:)
Keep visiting..Happy Blogging
Awesome akka.. you remember me?
Awesome akka.. :D
Yeah I remember you...Thanks for the read Abhishek :)
I hope things are better now :)
I hope its not biographical...
you echoed my mind Valli.... amazed
Well expressed friend... just see to the second stanza's rhyming, if it can be little improved :-)
Regards,
Anunoy Samanta
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Its well written... lets try a chirpy new poem will you?
Very sad and profound!
How pathetic and hollow one feels when finds no one around who can understand his/her feelings, being within the crowd one feels lonely and worthless.....
I somewhere identify my grief in your pain. :(
A very nice creation...
the silent throbbing in these lines touched meeeee
Depression is a person's worst enemy ! b'ful lines ...
awwww...touching poem but a lovely write up Valli celebrating the verve, the passion and the elevation that emotions bestow upon us...
Hope you feel better soon.
xoxo