Tuesday, November 02, 2010

Another part of me

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Deep inside me
There is another part of me
Which you did not see
So, You don't know how it will be

It got lost somewhere,
Somewhere in the deep corner of my heart cave
Getting suppressed,
Always suppressed, Because it is not brave

It has got feelings
that cant be expressed
Regretting the pain of those unexpressed feelings
It really got depressed

It is getting killed
bit by bit
Suffering pain
Each and every minute

It wants to come out,
Come out, with full force
Breaking all its freedom restricting doors
And just scream and shout
How it really feels

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Mahalakshmi said...

Superbbbbb Valli :)

Valli said...

ThanQ Maha..:)

Nandu said...

Touching :(

Valli said...

ThanQ Nandu

... Madhumathi ... said...

Sooperb akka.. :) gud lines!

Cutie Pie (♥‿♥) said...

lot of true feelings

Anonymous said...

hmm who askd u to hide anothr part of urz?:(..let it cum out babyy..n njoy yr freedom..share it wid me alsoo:P..nyways
gud 1 vallzzzzzzz as always:)..

Valli said...

Madhumathi...ThanQ dear
Prathi...Yeah...ThanQ dear
Snehambika...He he...I'm trying hard to do that...ThanQ dear

Anonymous said...

muito bom, eu gostei!

Anonymous said...

Really awesome

Valli said...


I guess it means

Very good, I liked! ciao

ThanQ =]



PRANEETH said...

Poetry la ledu kani...
Words and sentences are awesome and beautiful....

Valli said...

ThanQ Praneeth

sathish kumar said...

poignant Valli.... rhythm of melancholy..

Anupam karn said...

All the parts can't be brave, some have to take back seat! Nice poem!!

Prasoon said...

Allow it to come out,

Come out, with full energy

Stop the pain, express the feelings

World has just seen Half of You

Show them, Another side of you!!

Jay Singh said...

Very true Valli. We all have another part inside us, which we do not show to others. Only a select few have that privilege and opportunity.

Lovely post.



Anonymous said...

lovely :)

Bikramjit said...

Hmm well then you shud let it out ..

beautiful poem



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