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Disturbed and depressed soul
stares towards the hole,
She could sense and consume all dark
deeply covered with hollow marks
she stands at her balcony
trying to escape the melancholy
there the cold breeze had tickled her before
But now, she finds it soothing no more
Now, the music seems like noise
and silence has captured her voice
The beautiful sight of the rose
calms not her worries or woes
She looks across those shining stars in the dark sky
Sadly, It wasn't pleasing, wasn't pleasing to her eye
This is her life now, to live in the pain's shadow,
and to regret the decisions and broken vows!
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That's a tough life to lead !!!
So true that oftentimes things that had made someone happy when they were not depressed doesn't work when they are depressed. Your example of music, for example. And somehow even flowers don't bring joy. I think your poem characterized depression very well.
Back to blogosphere after a long time..Urs is the first post I pondered.. Well-written dear. Beautiful narration..Could see it before eyes.
Hi Valli,
Oh, depression in the morning, nobody should live a life of depression & regret. Always find reasons to be happy and bring a smile to one's own face as well as the faces of others.
Regards
Jay
My Blog
This too shall pass?
Hope it is just a passing phase. :)
Have a happy weekend!
melancholic !!
but c will get over dis phase soon,,life is too big for broken promises ....life goes on :)
nice poetry as always though it was a sad one :)
tough
There is always a time to move on, to give life another chance.
Very nicely penned.
sad but beautifully written ...
Touching words..
I loved the flow and rhythm of this poem. The part where you talked about the breeze, silence and music sound so real.
The picture painted is very vivid
Geetashree
http://panaecea.wordpress.com
To live in pain's shadow is very sad. Good one ~
No doubt all this happens when one is depressed-you have described it accurately.But one has the power to pull out of it INSIDE!
Very sensitive.
Lovely lines..:-)
such times when u feel like..
alone is something you'll be quite a lot
It's really nice. :)
You have real good writing skills. Keep up the work and keep writing more, that way you'll learn and improve more. :)
Such an awesome poem! Touches the soul. Our life takes shape according to the choices we make. I love your style of writing. Well done :-)
Cheers!
Gracy
www.gracydsouza.com
Life is not to be lived with regrets.
Nicely written..
nice
emotions came out beautifully in this poem,very well written
Beautiful dear..:)
The flow of words within each meter is amazing, Valli. Love this!
I LOVED this...
And I also noticed that we think in similar lines..
Our ideas collide!!
Hey Valli
'regret the decisions and broken vows'
I wish the gloomy soul finds the gleam at the end of the hole. The pain can be easily felt.
Silly Smiles... Take you Miles :)