Sunday, February 10, 2013

Love letter - 55 fiction





Bapu bomma

Her heart and eyes smiled whenever she read his old love letter. The fragrance of his words spread all over her heart. Sadly, one day all that fragrance evaporated. When she read another letter from a book borrowed from her best friend. It contained same words. Those words however beautiful mean nothing to her now.



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Tarang Sinha said...

Nice one and nice sketch!:)

ʞɐ said...

Nicely written.

And the Sketch is well done. :)

Suneetha said...

Hi Valli, nice post and wonderful blog :)

Vishal Rathod said...

good one Valli . A Great Heart Break

Ritesh Agarwal said...

Wow, the first ten minutes I was just swooning at the ambience.....the stars in the background and the soul-stirring music.......coming to your blog is like walking into paradise. *still in daze*

Reshma said...

beautifully crafted 55 fiction!! The sketch complements the post artistically...

Unknown said...

seriously both are really nice, your thoughts and your sketch...........

Unknown said...

..so sad !!! but well crafted f-55

Bushra said...

How sad:( Nice one though :)

Unknown said...

beautiful sketch! beautiful narration!

provoqd said...

Hi Valli,

That's a cute looking sketch. Oh my, I smell betrayal in this F55, must have been heart shattering for her.
Lovely read once again. :)


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Deepak Kripal said...

Very nice story Valli. so much in just 55 words. and very meaningful.

great read. keep writing.

Rat said...

nice sketch and the story too.. you re becoming 55 specialist now :-) good one Valli. :-) keep it up..

Gracy Dsouza said...

Poignant. What a sudden twist in the end. Very well scripted :-)

TTT said...

awwwww...... no !

But a great post ! and the sketch is wonderful !

Unknown said...

Oops I did not expect those last lines. Sad but nicely written and a very nice sketch to go with it.

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D.Nambiar said...

:( Sad story.
Love that picture. It is SO attractive!!

Unknown said...

Awww.. heart touching.. :(

odyzz said...

sketch with your pen and sketch with your words ..both of them are awesome..

Namrata said...

Nicely twisted at the end..in fact can say surprising..:0

Maumita Bhattacharya said...

Beautifully described story in such a few words. Kudos!! Great work :)

Ayushee Ghoshal said...

:') Sweet. on Love letter

Unknown said...

nice :)

 

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