Her heart and eyes smiled whenever she read his old love letter. The fragrance of his words spread all over her heart. Sadly, one day all that fragrance evaporated. When she read another letter from a book borrowed from her best friend. It contained same words. Those words however beautiful mean nothing to her now.
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Nice one and nice sketch!:)
Nicely written.
And the Sketch is well done. :)
Hi Valli, nice post and wonderful blog :)
good one Valli . A Great Heart Break
Wow, the first ten minutes I was just swooning at the ambience.....the stars in the background and the soul-stirring music.......coming to your blog is like walking into paradise. *still in daze*
beautifully crafted 55 fiction!! The sketch complements the post artistically...
seriously both are really nice, your thoughts and your sketch...........
..so sad !!! but well crafted f-55
How sad:( Nice one though :)
beautiful sketch! beautiful narration!
Hi Valli,
That's a cute looking sketch. Oh my, I smell betrayal in this F55, must have been heart shattering for her.
Lovely read once again. :)
Regards
Jay
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Very nice story Valli. so much in just 55 words. and very meaningful.
great read. keep writing.
nice sketch and the story too.. you re becoming 55 specialist now :-) good one Valli. :-) keep it up..
Poignant. What a sudden twist in the end. Very well scripted :-)
awwwww...... no !
But a great post ! and the sketch is wonderful !
Oops I did not expect those last lines. Sad but nicely written and a very nice sketch to go with it.
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:( Sad story.
Love that picture. It is SO attractive!!
Awww.. heart touching.. :(
sketch with your pen and sketch with your words ..both of them are awesome..
Nicely twisted at the end..in fact can say surprising..:0
Beautifully described story in such a few words. Kudos!! Great work :)
:') Sweet. on Love letter
nice :)