Wednesday, January 16, 2013

Dawn and dreams





dreaming girl


When dawn kissed the sky,
sky blushed to golden and my
golden dreams faded...

*~*~*

When dreams kiss my eyes,
with wings of peace my soul flies
until dawn arrives...

Written for Haiku Heights




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ʞɐ said...

Beautifully Penned. :)

C.S.H said...

Oh so beautiful.. you are very talented and the image fits perfectly. It has that dreamy appeal

Unknown said...

cute, pretty and beautiful piece of work :)

Vishal Rathod said...

Lovely Valli. keep Writing and make people happy.

Panchali said...

Aah...so serene, so beautiful!! You're a true poet!

Deepak Kripal said...

Beautiful haiku Valli.. You have superbly correlated the cycle of nature with soul..

Good one.. Keep writing dear..

sathish said...

aha! Magical... Totally magical...

Bikram said...

That is a beautiful poem, loved it .. I will say full of dreams

Bikram's

Easwar Arumugam said...

Dawn vs dreams. Beautiful!

Umesh Awasthi said...

Really beautiful and perfect!
really written beautifully

Ashish said...

you are an inspiration, valli.

Woman'n'Beyond said...

Wow! That's poetry!!

Tarang Sinha said...

Lovely set Valli...beautifully crafted...really!!:)

TTT said...

absolutely gorgeous !

provoqd said...

Hi Valli,

Perfect post depicting the time from dawn to dusk and that too with the soulful music of Zara Zara playing in the background, mesmerizing.

Regards

Jay
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Sadia Khan said...

Wow thats so lovely..:)

Sheshnath Prasad said...

Both Haikus inspire me much. These are the blosome of petals of heart

Grace said...

I like the dreams fading and arriving ~ Good one ~

the little princess said...

lovely!!

Locomente said...

The first set is amazing... Very poetic...

D.Nambiar said...

Wow. You think 'beautifully' :)

Anonymous said...

Neat! hope-filled...

kaykuala said...

Dreams have a way of fading and of coming back to fulfill yet another dream. Nicely Valli!

Hank

Preeti S. said...

Gorgeous imagery. I love it.

debu said...

with wings of peace...my soul flies....up for keeps ... good one

Eliz Frank said...

This is woonderfuul and I love the stars floating by... ;-)
Eliz

Eliz Frank said...

I thought I had corrected that silly spelling... I meant wonderful! :-)

Unknown said...

let your golden dreams never fade..lovely haiku indeed.:)

 

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