Dawn and dreams

Wednesday, January 16, 2013

Dawn and dreams

When dawn kissed the sky,
sky blushed to golden and my
golden dreams faded...

*~*~*

When dreams kiss my eyes,
with wings of peace my soul flies
until dawn arrives...

Written for Haiku Heights

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ʞɐ said...: Beautifully Penned. :); January 16, 2013 at 12:28 AM
C.S.H said...: Oh so beautiful.. you are very talented and the image fits perfectly. It has that dreamy appeal; January 16, 2013 at 7:13 AM
Unknown said...: cute, pretty and beautiful piece of work :); January 16, 2013 at 9:06 AM
Vishal Rathod said...: Lovely Valli. keep Writing and make people happy.; January 16, 2013 at 11:29 AM
Panchali said...: Aah...so serene, so beautiful!! You're a true poet!; January 16, 2013 at 12:00 PM
Deepak Kripal said...: Beautiful haiku Valli.. You have superbly correlated the cycle of nature with soul..

Good one.. Keep writing dear..; January 16, 2013 at 12:04 PM
sathish said...: aha! Magical... Totally magical...; January 16, 2013 at 2:42 PM
Bikram said...: That is a beautiful poem, loved it .. I will say full of dreams

Bikram's; January 16, 2013 at 3:01 PM
Easwar Arumugam said...: Dawn vs dreams. Beautiful!; January 16, 2013 at 3:39 PM
Umesh Awasthi said...: Really beautiful and perfect!
really written beautifully; January 16, 2013 at 3:42 PM
Ashish said...: you are an inspiration, valli.; January 16, 2013 at 4:32 PM
Woman'n'Beyond said...: Wow! That's poetry!!; January 16, 2013 at 4:39 PM
Tarang Sinha said...: Lovely set Valli...beautifully crafted...really!!:); January 16, 2013 at 6:37 PM
TTT said...: absolutely gorgeous !; January 16, 2013 at 7:00 PM
provoqd said...: Hi Valli,

Perfect post depicting the time from dawn to dusk and that too with the soulful music of Zara Zara playing in the background, mesmerizing.

Regards

Jay
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Sadia Khan said...: Wow thats so lovely..:); January 16, 2013 at 9:21 PM
Sheshnath Prasad said...: Both Haikus inspire me much. These are the blosome of petals of heart; January 16, 2013 at 10:46 PM
Grace said...: I like the dreams fading and arriving ~ Good one ~; January 17, 2013 at 5:59 AM
the little princess said...: lovely!!; January 17, 2013 at 11:03 AM
Locomente said...: The first set is amazing... Very poetic...; January 17, 2013 at 9:12 PM
D.Nambiar said...: Wow. You think 'beautifully' :); January 18, 2013 at 7:46 AM
Anonymous said...: Neat! hope-filled...; January 19, 2013 at 2:12 PM
kaykuala said...: Dreams have a way of fading and of coming back to fulfill yet another dream. Nicely Valli!

Hank; January 19, 2013 at 6:01 PM
Preeti S. said...: Gorgeous imagery. I love it.; January 21, 2013 at 7:15 PM
debu said...: with wings of peace...my soul flies....up for keeps ... good one; January 22, 2013 at 10:07 AM
Eliz Frank said...: This is woonderfuul and I love the stars floating by... ;-)
Eliz; January 23, 2013 at 8:24 AM
Eliz Frank said...: I thought I had corrected that silly spelling... I meant wonderful! :-); January 23, 2013 at 8:28 AM
Unknown said...: let your golden dreams never fade..lovely haiku indeed.:); January 26, 2013 at 11:24 AM