Silent cry

Saturday, September 08, 2012

Frozen tears
render silent cry;
Heavy heart!

Written for Haiku Heights

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Tarang Sinha said...: Nice one Valli!; September 8, 2012 at 4:44 PM
Amrit Sinha said...: A very beautiful rendition of sorrow !!!; September 8, 2012 at 5:09 PM
Ellecee said...: Tender and sad. "heavy heart" indeed.; September 8, 2012 at 7:47 PM
Unknown said...: Lovely haiku - despite the depth of melancholy.; September 9, 2012 at 1:12 AM
joanne said...: a heavy heart is so difficult to bear....let those tears flow!; September 9, 2012 at 3:00 AM
Mark said...: Great sorrow here...

Render; September 9, 2012 at 3:25 AM
Jasmeet said...: Heavy heart...intense. Loved the haiku; September 9, 2012 at 12:41 PM
TTT said...: intense !; September 9, 2012 at 5:10 PM
Simran said...: render silent cry for frozen heart!
Touching! beautifully done Valli :) <3; September 9, 2012 at 8:41 PM
Nirati said...: Silence says a lot.
A silent cry, even more .. :)

@Tales of her and by her.
&
@Teenage Babblings
xx; September 9, 2012 at 9:13 PM
Rahul Bhatia said...: Very nice writing Valli:); September 10, 2012 at 12:22 PM
Anonymous said...: immensely painful; September 11, 2012 at 11:23 AM
Geetansh Gupta said...: Valli i really appreciate ur work.. Hatts off; September 11, 2012 at 10:12 PM

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