Valli's blog 
Photo by Little Heart Archu
I'm sad...
I'm sad...
sad like
colorless rainbow...
sad like
broken window...
sad like
parched land..So dry!
sad like
starless empty vast sky
sad like
burnt buds....that never bloom
sad like
long pause with no resume
sad like
leafless old hollow tree
sad like
pinned butterfly waiting to be free....
19 Comments ♥ ツ
Post a Comment
Thanks for commenting on my space :) Please do not spam!
this is so sad ... but the lines are beautiful ! reflecting the pain and loneliness
Don't be sad Valli...:):)
This is beautiful! I liked "Sad like long pause with no resume" :)
Melancholic!!!!
Don't be sad ... cheer up :-)
valli thats really sad one but the way you have written it is really beautiful......loved it
lovely...and sorely touching!
:(
Well take care and for what its worth this time will pass too bringing back the smiles and good times
take care
Bikram's
Wonderful lines!! :)
Mind blowing thoughts,such comparisons,you take my breath away.
But do not be so sad,i hope this is only fiction.
Oh! you made me sad. It reminds me of the poem 'It Hurts' I wrote last year...
Oh Oh! Please cheer up :D
The butterfly will be free indeed.
hehe ur poem made me more sad :')
Valliiiiiii!!! <3
Come on ya! There are much better things in life you are going to be blessed with!!! Come on gal!!! You deserve much better and always remember you are the best!!! :)
Luv ya!
That's poignant yet beautiful, Its the colors of emotions that give a poem vibrancy and yours is buzzing with life.
No Words For Your Poetry :(
Read Daily So Many Blogs. But Never Read Like Your Blog :)
I Pray To God That You Will Write
I'm Happy
I'm Happy
In Coming Days :)
Touching words! Words that takes in that world where pain persist. Well rendered.
Thanks for the read Everyone :)