Extremely
depressed heart thinks of
suicide
But, somewhere
in corner of heart
there is hope
A tiny hope
which prompts "What if things
turn around!!?"
That tiny hope
created a great
difference!
Written for Haiku Heights
{Feelings extracted from my heart and painted as poetry art!}
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a true, welcome and helpful difference... :)
one has to have hope, to get over with all the melancholy inside their heart and head.
nice post, Valli..
Regards,
jayanth
It always creates a difference...
nice one Valli... :)
very beautifully expressed valli ... so much of emotions and an awesome haiku :)
Very nice... :)
Indeed..gave a life..to be lived by being alive.. I liked the way you handled the prompt.. well done..
This is lovely, Valli. I like the last one that speaks about the hope that makes the difference. Thank you.
Never lose HOPE..:) thanks for sharing..:)
And so it does..hope makes a big difference ~
nice haiku! tiny hope creates a big difference..thanks for sharing..
Nicely - where there's life, there's hope!!
i got this feeling once.... some years of hope just blowed that 1min of weakness...hope is great this haiku is a fact!
A little hope goes a long way!
Tell Me, Sister Crow
Lovely words and picture too. both are complimenting to each other and increasing intensity of the feelings you wanted to portray..
:-)
I loved the picture and these lines.
Sometimes a tiny flicker of hope,makes us hold on. :)
x
well , the use of word suicide was quite disturbing for me ...otherwise nicely written !
Thanks for the read Jayanth,Cynosure,Surbhi,Pranitha,Rameshji,Ellecee,Sagittarian,Grace,Jeannette,Andy,Kalyan,MMT,Jena Nirati and Alka :)
Remember Valli. Hope is a good thing, maybe the best of things, and no good thing ever dies..