Friday, April 06, 2012


Candle hope

depressed heart thinks of

But, somewhere
in corner of heart
there is hope

A tiny hope
which prompts "What if things
turn around!!?"

That tiny hope
created a great

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Anonymous said...

a true, welcome and helpful difference... :)

one has to have hope, to get over with all the melancholy inside their heart and head.

nice post, Valli..


CYNOSURE said...

It always creates a difference...
nice one Valli... :)

Surbhi said...

very beautifully expressed valli ... so much of emotions and an awesome haiku :)

Pranita said...

Very nice... :)

Ramesh Sood said...

Indeed..gave a be lived by being alive.. I liked the way you handled the prompt.. well done..

Ellecee said...

This is lovely, Valli. I like the last one that speaks about the hope that makes the difference. Thank you.

Sagittarian said...

Never lose HOPE..:) thanks for sharing..:)

Grace said...

And so it does..hope makes a big difference ~

Jeannette, said...

nice haiku! tiny hope creates a big difference..thanks for sharing..

Andy Sewina said...

Nicely - where there's life, there's hope!!

kalyan said...

i got this feeling once.... some years of hope just blowed that 1min of weakness...hope is great this haiku is a fact!

Magical Mystical Teacher said...

A little hope goes a long way!

Tell Me, Sister Crow

Pranabananda Jena said...

Lovely words and picture too. both are complimenting to each other and increasing intensity of the feelings you wanted to portray..

Blahblaholic ♥ © said...

I loved the picture and these lines.
Sometimes a tiny flicker of hope,makes us hold on. :)

alka narula said...

well , the use of word suicide was quite disturbing for me ...otherwise nicely written !

☂☆ Vållῐ ★♬ said...

Thanks for the read Jayanth,Cynosure,Surbhi,Pranitha,Rameshji,Ellecee,Sagittarian,Grace,Jeannette,Andy,Kalyan,MMT,Jena Nirati and Alka :)

Jake said...

Remember Valli. Hope is a good thing, maybe the best of things, and no good thing ever dies..


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