Fuddling thoughts!

Friday, April 27, 2012

(Image taken from here)

Cloud of fuddling thoughts
hover my head; Burst to rain
as clarity comes!

Another take on clarity - Children hearts

Written for Haiku Heights

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Preeti S. said...: Impressive. But I'm unsure if the explosion actually leads to clarity, but rather a loss of sanity, haha. Great work. Keep it up! :); April 27, 2012 at 10:08 PM
Pranita said...: Very beautiful...!!! Your haiku and mine have quite a similar context... myn's the artifical water flow and yours is the real one! Haha..
Loved it Valli.. :); April 28, 2012 at 11:44 AM
kaykuala said...: Fuddling thoughts will become clear as they crystallize. How true, it takes a little time though!

Hank; April 28, 2012 at 12:28 PM
Yellow Tulip said...: Wow... nice thought flow... a thin margin between clarity and insanity...!.. beautiful; April 28, 2012 at 3:00 PM
Grace said...: I like the cloud of fuddling thoughts ~; April 28, 2012 at 4:59 PM
Jaideep Rao said...: Aanother amazing haiku from you, thank you :); April 28, 2012 at 5:32 PM
Tigerbrite said...: Pretty Blog. Nice Haiku. the rain washing away the fuddle :); April 28, 2012 at 10:14 PM
Chèvrefeuille said...: Wow! What a nicely composed haiku Valli. Very well done I am impressed.; April 28, 2012 at 11:44 PM
CYNOSURE said...: beautifully done Valli... :); April 29, 2012 at 12:43 AM