Friday, April 27, 2012

Fuddling thoughts!

(Image taken from here)

Cloud of fuddling thoughts
hover my head; Burst to rain
as clarity comes!

Another take on clarity - Children hearts

Written for Haiku Heights

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Preeti S. said...

Impressive. But I'm unsure if the explosion actually leads to clarity, but rather a loss of sanity, haha. Great work. Keep it up! :)

Pranita said...

Very beautiful...!!! Your haiku and mine have quite a similar context... myn's the artifical water flow and yours is the real one! Haha..
Loved it Valli.. :)

kaykuala said...

Fuddling thoughts will become clear as they crystallize. How true, it takes a little time though!


Yellow Tulip said...

Wow... nice thought flow... a thin margin between clarity and insanity...!.. beautiful

Grace said...

I like the cloud of fuddling thoughts ~

Jaideep Rao said...

Aanother amazing haiku from you, thank you :)

Tigerbrite said...

Pretty Blog. Nice Haiku. the rain washing away the fuddle :)

Chèvrefeuille said...

Wow! What a nicely composed haiku Valli. Very well done I am impressed.

CYNOSURE said...

beautifully done Valli... :)

Sri Valli said...

Thanks for the read everyone :)


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