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Bars of guilt surrounds
all over, leaving me remorsed,
humiliated
Free my tormented
heart from jaws of guilt with kind
virtue - forgiveness!
Written for Haiku Heights
Saturday, April 07, 2012
Forgive me please!
(Image taken from here)
Bars of guilt surrounds
all over, leaving me remorsed,
humiliated
Free my tormented
heart from jaws of guilt with kind
virtue - forgiveness!
Written for Haiku Heights
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flowing expression.. nice one..
beautiful Haiku indeed... :)
I think you did well here..seeking forgiveness is a great virtue..
Beautiful and you have a point.. One can truly feel guilt free if one accepts and stays humble. Loved it
I enjoyed your haiku. A plea for forgiveness so well written.
Forgiveness frees us from our guilt and torment ~
Very beautiful Haiku.. and very true..! When guilty, and forgiveness is not given, it's the worst feeling one can go thru i think!
Very beautiful, Valli!
Wow! what a wonderful cursor you have given on your blog! ...Don't feel like leaving:)
Very true! To forgive is to cleanse oneself but difficult for some who want to get even! But your haiku had said it brilliantly!
Hank
Wonderful set of haiku and great photo:)
Awesome ... a wonderful haiku set with a deeper meaning, written with a lot of feeling.
Namaste
Something similar posted on Forgive prompt very beautiful...
There's nothing more freeing than forgiveness.
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Thanks for the read Jayanth,Cynosure,Rameshji,Kajal,Ellecee,Grace,Pranitha,AmitAag,Kaykuala,Tarang,Chev,Mohini,MMT :)