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Can a baby bird
ever fly if it isn't eager
to hug the sky?
Written for Haiku Heights
Sunday, April 01, 2012
Baby bird
(Image taken from here)
Can a baby bird
ever fly if it isn't eager
to hug the sky?
Written for Haiku Heights
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I love that image of hugging the sky. Great poem.
awe so cute.
What a nice haiku!
I like the enthusiasm... hug the sky ~
http://everydayamazin.blogspot.ca/2012/03/eager.html
A really sweet haiku. Thank you
I would say the answer to your question is a resounding NO! :)
Eager to Write Haiku
Oh, that's lovely!
a baby bird can still fly because it is created to fly..maybe not immediately but there will come a time it will learn to fly..but in life we can't fly if we are not willing to learn..visiting you Valli ;)
No it cannot...aren't we talking about something more than eagerness..perhaps curiosity too..
Good day Valli, again a challenge to write haiku, just as the one of few miles. Nice to see you again in this challenge.
This haiku is very well done, lovely imagery you paint with these words.
Namaste
sweet haiku as well as contemplative ~ thanks, namaste, ^_^
Succinct. Lovely take to the word eager..
However, I just urge you to check the second line again.. I'm not sure of it being syllabically on target.
Flavorwise, this was tops!
Thanks for the read Teresa, Izdiher, Bruce,Grace,Ellecee,Magical Mystical Teacher, Karen,Sie, Rameshji,Chev,Carol, Leo :)
Very very inspirational, loved it..:)
Wonderful, Valli!
Thanks for sharing. Love the image of a fledgling bird.