Tuesday, March 27, 2012

Black sheep of my family

I live a life of shame
I have got negative fame
Anything I express is tagged lame
Nobody here knows my name

I'm taken for granted
My opinions doesn't count
My presence is unwanted
I'm not taken into account

I live in fear
I have no acceptance from near
Insulted with fake praise
and used as a bad example always

I'm born to live
Then, why do I long to die?
I'm a loner, bitter fact!!
Then, why do I long to prove it a lie?

Mom and Dad..."I'm sorry!"
I couldn't make you feel proud of me
You both provided me with everything
But, sadly I ended up being nothing!

Wish I wasn't born
Because of me, You both were torn
Worthless me
Black sheep of our family

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AmitAag said...

Wow! Beautiful, Valli!

Sagittarian said...

This is so wonderfully written and expressed. A bit sad and frustrating if we will just think of it, but life and everything in life has a reason, being a black sheep has also reason, to make the good sheep realize that if there's no black sheep how they can distinguish good to bad. Not all black sheep are bad, just think you have a purpose in life.:)

thanks for sharing Valli..:) Have a nice day! :)

Anonymous said...

Thats quite sad, and reveals the hurtful feelings of a fragile heart. But cheer up girl. The 'Black' Sheep is always distinct and is an exception in the crowd itself. As far as you are your company and with words ( and arts, i mean drawing), I am sure you can manage. And heyy, what are friends for ? Thank to them a lot. You need to give them a chance isnt it to show how much they love you ?

Take care :)

Bdw, LOVE the background of the template. so dreamy :) :)

Ellecee said...

This is a wonderful though very sad poem. I hope it is not a reflection of how you feel about yourself but instead a poet writing about the feelings of "other" black sheep. Very well written

♫♪♥PhilO♥♪♫ said...

This is so sad. It's horrible to feel unwanted.
But no you aren't worthless at all :)
I loved the poem.

✿Sie✿ said...

you have written it so expressively Valli..sad but true..I am an only child but I felt like these before..continue sharing ;)

Rahul Bhatia said...

A lovely weave on worthlessness, Valli:) Anyone who writes so well cannot be worthless!

Anonymous said...

Very Nice Lines...

Locomente said...

I bet that each one of us would feel the same... Very well written..

I wonder how u can come out with so many beautiful poems...

Keep mesmerising us...

Kitty said...

Oh! don't be so disheartened...beautifully expressed lines proves that you can write beautifully and you are very talented ! :)

♫♪♥PhilO♥♪♫ said...

And I'm in love with your drawings :)

♥●• İzdihër •●♥ said...

This is so beautiful :).

InnocentDevil said...

wow.. what a colorful blog u have... love the poetry and love the blog... love u..

☂☆ Vållῐ ★♬ said...

Thank you so much for encouraging me and lifting me up with your kind words in this depressing mood :)
Thanks AmitAag, Sagittarian, adreamygal, Ellecee, Juhi,Sie, Rahulji, Vineet, Locomente, Kitty, Izdiher, InnocentDevil

Pari said...

Hey dear lovely ..i cant get ur reply bac k i guess u said thanks obviously fb is slow so im using my real blogger account instead but this is the real prob i got it i can understand thru ur words wats its abt :) but dun u worri everything ll be alright .its a way to express teh feelings of burden ..in ur heart ..and ur drawings simply tells the talent u have :) hw u feel and what mood u have today ur like me dear lol :) .waise drawing nai karte but i do some kinda show it thru words :)


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