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Rainbow like daydreams
can see them but, can't touch them
Mesmerizing illusions
Rainbow like daydreams
Mesmerizing illusions
can see them but, can't touch them
rainbow like daydreams
P.s: I'm new to this haiku, naisaiku style of poetry. You are free to correct my mistakes if there are any or give any suggestions if you like to. It will help me do better.
Written for The Haiku Challenge 2012 - Day 12 – February 12th – Theme or word: Colors form:Naisaiku
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Beautiful image and words...you handled the form well
wow wow the music is so mesmerizing ... a bommanu choosthu music vintuntee ahaaaaa entha madhurangaa vundho.... adbutham ga vundhi..
Hmm ... beautiful! Love the music too.
Colourful illusion! :)
Love the idea of daydream.. :))
I think that you did a great job!
Yea, you did a wonderful job! Love the picture! :) <3
The image you used is perfect with the feel of your Naisaiku ... I think you did a great job for your debut in this form. Thank you for sharing!
Artistic image accompanied by beautiful haiku! I'm not familiar with the Naisaiku part of. Does it require different syllable counts, other than 5-7-5? {|:-)
Phew, this is a busy blog! Cool NaiSaiKu too! Thanks for playing along.
Andy Sewina
Thanks for the read Susie, Kalyan, Asni, Simi, Mama Zen, Amber, Becca,Fiona, SweetTalkingGuy :)
@Fiona.....Naisaku is a format in which ....swapping of first and third lines of the haiku....conveys the same meaning!...That is how I understood the meaning
Wow wow wow... a colourful image! Beautiful Naisaiku! Damn good..!
Thanks for the read Someone is Special :)
This is lovely, you certainly conveyed beauty and a dream like feel to this poem :)
I didn't know this type of poem, will give it a go.