Sunday, November 13, 2011

If I've got two extra hours in a day

If I've got two extra hours in a day
I'll make sure it is filled with joy and play
With love, I'll have fun and tease my younger bro
I'll nourish plants at my home, And help them grow
I'll watch some cartoon, Eat delicious ice-cream
I'll take a quick nap, and have an enchanting dream
Splattering all colors, I'll draw and paint
I'll crack stupid jokes that make others faint
I'll enjoy beauty of our great mother nature
And take some photos of its sceneries and creatures
I'll scribble random verses, and call it as a poem
I'll enjoy listening to music, I'll sing and I'll hum
I'll complete the small things that were pending
I'll spend more time with family by arranging a gathering
I'll surf, I'll chat, I'll blog
And let my feelings flow out without any clog
I'll have a little smile and hearty laugh
And just feel the freedom as I am away from routine day to day chaff
Lastly, I just hope and pray
If I've got two extra hours each and every day!

This poem is written as an entry for Surf Excel Matic #GetSmart Contest :)
To read in telugu click :here

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Simran said...

Superb my dear :)
simply loved it!
I wish you all the best for the contest..My so talented dear :)

winds of time said...

hahha extra hours unte bagundeda :P :P

Someone is Special said...

simply beautiful poem.. Loved it so much.. Best wishes..

Someone is Special

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Simply WONDERFUL! Best wishes for winning the contest :)

magiceye said...

that was lovely

best wishes for the contest!

Manisha Bhatia said...

O! This s soo cute n yet soo realistic! Lovely baby! Wish u all d v v best!!

Manisha Bhatia said...

O! This s soo cute n yet soo realistic! Lovely baby! Wish u all d v v best!!

PRANEETH said...


Rahul Bhatia said...

Lovely thoughts and so simply worded!

Sunita Sriram said...

simple and sweet!

Siny U K Nair said...

Awesome :)

Indian Citizen Ranting said...

Beautiful poem :) Best of luck. Please do visit my post Aye Zindagi!

Maliny said...

that was exceptional . . marvel . . keep up d gud work :)

Beyond Horizon said...

Be happy and chirpy as your poem every day :)

Unknown said...

True isn't it? We're so busy that if we get two extra hours, we'd spend it doing the little things that make life worth living? Lovely post :)

PS, if you have time, could you read the post of yours truly, this humble competitor to the ipad2? :)

PhilO♥ said...

I loved the way you rhymed it :) Flowing, simple and nice to read :) The picture is lovely..

Hemant said...

Hey..nice poem's wonderful...and so suitable for the topic....wish u a luck and may u win d contest :)

Louise Hernan said...

It's easy to see by reading this poem what an upbeat person you are Valli - such positive thoughts!! :)

Anoop Mathai Mathew said...

Simply Sweet!
The words are delicious and at ease.
And the rhyme has essence and flavoR.
A spicy curry to y heart's feast!
All the best!!!

Anoop Mathai Mathew said...

Simply Sweet!
The words are delicious and at ease.
And the rhyme has essence and flavor.
A spicy curry to my heart's feast!
All the best!!!

pramod said...

great poetic approach. well chosen words. really beautiful way to spend the two hours.

joel fernandes said...

that was awesum!! the most fun,funny and entertaining from other blogposts in the contest :)

Defiant said...

Wonderful thought!! Beautiful poem..:)

Good luck sister :)

Anonymous said...

true reflection of ur feelings..grr8 word nd gud s hv a luk...

Bindu Juneja said...

Very nice. I echo similar feelings
and I said few things like these in my post

⁂ܓVållῐ ⁂ܓ☺ said...

Simi,Winds of time, someone is special, Lady Fiona, Magiceye, Mani, Praneeth, Rahul, Specs buffy, Siny, Ranting Indian, Malini, Beyond Horizon,The Storyteller, Philo, Hemant, Louise, Anoop , Pramod, Joel, Madhu, Zradar, Bindu

Thanks a lot for reading my post and sharing your opinions :)

M'Bai Madrasi said...

beautiful poem.....It was as if the two hours would be full of life....good luck!!!!!!

Sri Valli said...

Thanks for the read Madrasi :)

bemoneyaware said...

Amazing poem..Found the end "If had extra hours each and every day!"...very interesting..Thank God all our wishes are not answered..:-)

Unknown said...

I like it very much I first time visiting your site and its awesome you blog just feel like organized and it is good thing you have!! I read this poem n I hope you will win the contest.
I repeat
Your blog is really cute n awesome
I like to keep in touch with you !!

Sri Valli said...

bemoneyaware....Thanks for the read...:)
Vaibav Mule....Thank you so much for the read :)

amar naik said...


Abhishek Gorlagunta said... have a Twitter..this is abhishek akka.. :)) :D ..facebook la dukanam bundh chesna..andhukey.. ;) ..

Sri Valli said...

Amar :)
Thanks for the read :)

Vihaari nenu twitter ekkuva use cheyanu :/

Locomente said...

A TWO long hours can make a huge difference!

⁂ܓVållῐ ⁂ܓ☺ said...

Thanks for the read Locomente :)


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