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I can't hold the stars in my hand
But I can lock their glitter in my eyes
I can't touch the clouds no matter, how many times I jump
But I can reach the rain drops when the cloud melts
I can't feel the joy of sloping down the rainbow
But I can give its colors to my lovely dreams
I can't fly freely like a butterfly
But I can give its wings to my beautiful thoughts
I can't reach you coz you are far away!
But I can feel your presence through your memories!
Telugu version of this poem : Here
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Nice one valli, especially the lines on sky and rain drops..:)
Have good day..
You said it well Valli - the last verse was my favorite! :)
I like the poem so much :) Loads of positivity in them, which at times is hard to find in your words :P The best of all your poems i have read :)
Beautiful words!!
lovely poignant lines...nicely crafted words!
Just loved it,Valli :)
your words reflect wonderful emotions,
you expresses feeling that sometimes strike to mine heart but I finds it hard to give as sweet wordings as you give each time :)
Lovely!!
cute thoughts!
Thanks for the read Pramoda, Louise, a dreamygal, Vyankatesh, Kalyan, Simran, Sowmya
Superb. Each and every line...makes perfect sense... You are a genius. :)
nice one Valli
Beautiful thoughts..:-)
lovely thoughts Valli !
You have made the impossible dreams possible-it is a very soothing thought!
awesome track opps poem...guess wat while reading this perfect rainbow was getting played on your blog and i could feel each and every word!...beautiful!!
thats a really nice poem....loved it....and so true
"I can't fly freely like a butterfly
but I can give its wings to my beautiful thoughts "
This is so beautiful...
terrific :)
Beautiful poem with lots of positivity :)
Baagundadi, hope its correct! A nice poem where one reaches the infinity.
You do think very beautifully. Your poetry is simply lovely.
wonderful, mesmerising!
lovely lines. big likes. :-)
beautiful..:)
You are back with a beautiful poem. You depict the simple thoughts so beautifully.I'm so pleased to read you again and again :)
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You are a rock star.... i get goose bumps when i visit this blog...the stars, the soft music, the romantic poetry....This place is a romancer's paradise
you always do a great job!! excellent words!
Beautifully composed. :)
This one is truly awesome with such a nice flow of thoughts!!!
Looking forward for more of such poems from you Valli!!!
Lovely...and how true!! You took me to a dreamy world, Valli. Lubbeddd this♥