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Memories of my past
Haunt me like shadow
Pushing me to drown
In the quicksand of sorrow
Poisonous fumes of past
Withers away buds of my new dreams
Who can understand my pain?
Who can listen to my mid-night silent screams?
Oh dear past! Don't hold me back!
Please let me go!
Let me live my life
With full sparkle glow!
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As usual.. awesome valli...
Hey Valli...
Same thoughts here :( My past is haunting me :|
Lovely poem :) Loved it :)
Nice poem with few lines. loved it.
bagundiii....asusual rocking and sad...
memories of past really comes in our mind fast :) very nice valli :)
The past does not let us live..
It always holds us back.
Nicely written :)
Thank you for your comment. Do come by again :)
I think it is the past that has always held us back and stopped from letting go. Letting go of the past might help letting go of many things.
Nice post.
Cheers,
Blasphemous Aesthete
gudone !
Thanks for the read Sajeed, Siny, Little Heart, Praneeth, Soumya, Philo, Blasphemous Aesthete, Sweeya :)
Very cool title and very emotional poem - good job Valli!! It's true too - a person's past can be relentless about staying in the present.
Lousie Hernan...thanks for the read :)
Wow! Loved it! :)
Thanks Simy for the read
another good piece.
Honestly i liked the way you use words and express them
very nice, I wish there was a switch off button.
Hi Valli,
What a coincidence,
"Who can listen to my midnight silent screams" and I'm just now listening to the Barfi title track on your site. Reminds me of how Barfi couldn't even express his emotions and angst vocally to anyone.
Lovely poetry once again Valli :)
Regards
Jay
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fantabulous as always valli
Awesome poem, Valli!
The expressions and motive of the poem sound good, although the rhyming seemed a big forced.
Love it...
wow!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
aha....past has so much to say! Does it stop bothering..? No...it keeps haunting. So, don't let past ruin your present.
Passionate piece...and I loved this, Valli!!:))
Beautiful. Weaving of words with deep meaning comes easily to you. Kudos!
First of all i love the way you have decorated your blog and yes nice poem too..:)
twitchy touchy words
Yeah !! past haunts and sometimes the prsent comes under the clutches of it..one needs a lot of courage to come out of it....beautifully penned as always...
One has to be on guard to keep past away and not let it spoil present.
Excellent poem.
Past always haunts us even if we hate it following...I wonder why haven't I visited this blog before. Anyway thanks for sharing.
Regards
Village Girl
give thy a break,
take a deep breath,
smell a lily,
live it up fully!
I dun know what to say, i guess good and sad.
But on d top its very well written.
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Beautiful poem once again. Oh past, don't hold me back.
wow!!!!!!!! awesome!! truely awesome
hey don't mind.. i am borrowing this pic!! :)