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Two strangers became close friends
Shared everything with feelings so deep and intense
Slowly, situations changed and the conditions went bad
They lost their initial pure emotions for each other,
Which they earlier had
Gradually everything changed with the wind of time
Now, Both left out with memories bitter and sublime
When they face each other, they put a fake smile of pretense
And they are back again to strangers from friends
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it feels so difficult when people who were once your buoy...move away as differences create a rift! :P
Hmm.it's a common issue now a days.
''Pal do pal ka saath fir tum kahaan hum kahaan''.
Nice one :)
Do read my Granny's poem on my blog:D
Take care ..
Ah! I just wish it doesn't happen you know coz it hurts like hell...been through it so much that now I even doubt genuine emotions !!
Take Care.
Touching one.. Situational one for me..
"Some times beginnings aren't so simple.. some times Good bye is the Only way..." -- Linkin Park
hmm it happens vallzz..but never mind..am sure 1day ul regain back yr same pure emotions:)..hope fr d best
Try until you find a good stranger.. Its always good to have happy ending ;) ..
*M*
Hey, Hi
that was a beautifully penned poem...the thought...it was excellent..and the words used were so apt...
See, the words havent left you...
:)
loved it...
Regards,
The Silhouette...
THE DELUSIONAL REALITY
Yeah :(
Thanks for the read
Simran
Thanks for the read...will check it out
Fatima
Yeah hurts like hell..:(
Thanks for the read
Srikanth
Yeah...Nice line :]
Thanks for the read
Sneha...
Hope so!
Thanks for the read
Maruthi
Hmmmm!...Will try :P
Thanks for the read
Eon..
Thanks for the read :]
Nice Dear...Loved it ,Guess evry1 kme across such situation in a lifetym ..Itz kind of Ok when we listen 2 our Heart nd break those walls :)
somethin u see happnin almost everyday...love has turned out to be a game 4 most...so true...but people change things change situations change...nicely penned..
somethin u see happnin almost everyday...love has turned out to be a game 4 most...so true...but people change things change situations change...nicely penned..
Life described so epically! Brilliant!
Strangers are always strangers...
IF we feel them strangers...
kani friends are always friends though they be in contact are not...
Prathi...
YEah...Thanks for the read :]
Vaisakhi...
Thanks for the read :]
Hairyman...
Thanks for the read :]
Praneeth...
Friends are always friends, though we be in contact or not...(If we treat them as friends)
Thanks for the read :]
This happend.. to me!..
Good poem akka.. :)
ThanQ Madhu
hey it happens many time.and in this virtual word it is so common. written very beautiful. keep going :)
some unspoken words...
Thanks for the read :]
Simple words used to explain a whole big story..nicely done
ThanQ Alcina
amazing friends terrible lovers
been at this place! Sometimes you think just what the fuck happened.
but time fades all :)
Yeah..:|
Thanks for the read Rainboy!
Very nice Valli :)
PS: I like the music on your blog.
It is very difficult to be strangers from friends, It is better not to know a person at all than feel a pang of bitterness everytime we happen to meet. nice poem.
Tranisitions in time:)
A beautiful story :-)
hmmmm well such is a life .. although I am not sure how i will react if we came face to face :)
Bikram's
And the wheel turned yet again & they fell in love
But not with each other... or so it may seem from your poem.
Nice one!
Thats so beautiful, You so candidly expressed something that happens in most marriages.