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I feel like dying
The moment I feel "Ah!!...I got used to this!"
My eyes are bitterly crying
saying, "Things are never gonna change! My life has no bliss...
But deep down inside a corner of my heart,
There is still the minutes of hope alive...
That keeps prompting me "Your good time will soon arrive !!"
Which makes me revive giving me courage and scope
To trod the untrodden...And unravel the hidden...
Falling, breaking and molding like a clay;
unclutching the shackles of melancholy and pessimism
I finally welcome the small flicker of hope and flow with the flow !
P.s: Last stanza contributed by my friend Fatima
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Very good poem akka :)
Those shackles can clamp down tight. If you let them.
I like!
i can see a ray of hope in ur life, coz u have an awesome imagination Valli :)
Keep going !!
superb poem... very mice... :)
Lved it...Nyc linez
Beautiful Lines :)
When we loose everything then the only hope becomes the reason and will to live!
Take care <3
lovely the lines. keep ur heart in rhythm and keep on singing...
Madhu...ThanQ dear :)
pd Creator...Yup...ThanQ :)
Naaz....ThanQ dear :)
Uday....ThanQ :)
Cutie Pie...ThanQ :)
Simran...Yeah...true...ThanQ :)
some unspoken words...ThanQ :)
Hey, Hi
after the tempest the only thing left are memories...and hope, well not alwaya...its good to have hope, it keeps us going, but then, why are memories bad? why is it that after the tempest we have to feel bad for its end? why not be happy that we experienced it??
Regards,
The Silhouette...
p.s. nice poem... :) thoughtful...
Haha...yeah..nice Questions Eon...
Thanks for the read :)
Hey, Valli that was a good poem...and it did reflect optimism after the storm has subsided....
I just hope this fiction of imagination doesn't remain as part of it only and that it sees the light and the ray of light n hope truly shines and lessens the darkness that has engulfed ! Coz past n memories are always there and will always be and we cannot always mourn on their loss we have to move on... don't we ??
And thanx a lot for the credit for the last stanza, I could only write that coz you wrote the initial verses :)
Take Care.
Fatima...:)
Good analysis about the poem...
ThanQ thanq dear...
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Do check it out on my blog :)
Good onee...
goood typical wordsss
Thanks Praneeth
hey manasa your poetry is very very sweet. your are a greate narrator.
your sweethttp://www.blogger.com/img/blank.gif venkat
Venkatesh...My name is Valli...and Thanks for liking my poems