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I miss those days when you called me with utmost love
You don't even bother to look at me now
I miss those days when you used to listen to stories I say
Now,You don't even bother to look at my way
I miss those days when you used to cheer my presence
Now,You've end up enjoying my absence
I miss those days when you considered me as your top priority
Now, I stand no where in your list
I miss those days when you loved to introduce me to your friends
Now, You just treat me like a stranger when they are around
I miss those days when you were always there for me,No matter what!
Now you don't even know that I exist
I miss those days when we both made this world feel jealous
Now, It's all 'Me' there is no 'Us'
I miss those days when you shared each and everything with me
Now, You've got too many friends to consider
I miss those days when you spoke nectar like words filled with innocence
Now, Every word you say hurts me in immense
I miss those days when you couldn't withstand my single drop of tear
Now, You don't even know that I'm crying
I miss those days when you've treated me just like an angel
Now, You've shown my way out from your heart's door
When there was 'Love' in your heart
You accepted me the way I was
And Now that love's gone!
You are looking for reasons to complain
How did you change so much leaving me without any clue?
You've hurt me a lot....Believe me it is true!
I miss you, I miss you to the core Not you,
The person you were before!
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Awesome... I loved it..
Vry tuchin
awesome :) love failure aa enti antha deep ga feel ayyi rasinattunnav :P
ThanQ Mahesh..:)
Prathi...ThanQ dear..:)
Bhavi...ThanQ Dear
wowwwwwwwwwww!!!!!!!!!!!!!.....
if i was with u..i wud have given u a warm hug...loved it so much... :)...
but i feel no one the earth shud ignore other person suddenly... :(...that whom we believe so much....
How sweet Kiran! >:D<
ThanQ..:)
I too wish the same...:'(
I miss you...not you the person u wer b4 //
Akka Ppl who r suffering may B different...but the same pain...same feelings :(HatsOff akka...
ThanQ Keerthana
absolutely true valli....u done a really good job
ThanQ Sanjana..:)
cute. :)
ThanQ kRsNa
I can feel the pain in each word you wrote in this article....
But....Just wanted to say you.... If it is love it will never go off....
People change.... Circumstances change.... Behavior changes but one's love is the only thing that can never change.... And if it changed its not love....
The way the Love is expressed might be changed....
But.... If it is Love it will never change....
Jyothi.
ThanQ Jyothi...
Wht you said is absolutely true..
Love never changes...If it does....Then it isn't love..
Sad story but beautiful lines!
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ThanQ Rupam...:)
:'( :'( :'( entoo ipdu chaduvtunte chala badaga undi :( :(
Painful words :(
winds of time
ThanQ
its nce ..
intrusting bt also sad ..
its reality n reality is sad ..
its true ..
bt also hurts alot ..
de feeling behind it ..
wht cn i say ..
hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm ..
i just lv it ..
sun...
Yeah...what you said is right...
Sometimes...reality is so sad and bitter...
ThanQ for loving it..:)
hmm superb feelings....
Thanks Neelu :)
I'm speechless, Valli!
was as if everything happening in front of my eyes, truly words of a dis-heartened soul... very nice, i loved it :)
Thanks Simran, Prasanb
With time, even the love seems to change.. Very touching words.. You've a talent for directness in words I think :)
Thanks for the read Leo :)
good oneeee
>:D<
very emotional. awesome write.. you are truly very expressive, valli..
you broke my heart.
Poignant lines, straight from heart with soul.
I like this 'I miss you poem!'
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Such a sad poem: I hope its not true. It's indeed strange how relationships change.
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v good poem valli
happens ...very oft . very touching Valli .
Hi Valli,
Lovely poem
Indeed, some days just never come back and all we can do is think about them and recall them from memories. Probably you should be on the lookout for the memory storing devices I spoke about in my blog :) They would help you out :)
Regards
Jay
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it touched the chords deep inside...beautifully penned..
lovely!
wonderful poem..
liked your blog too.
:)
You have shown me the mirror. I am hugging my beloved right away. Lovely poem. GBY.
true feelings akka poem is superb ...
wen dey ll know ur value n start missing u it ll b too late