Saturday, November 07, 2009

If my tears could speak







If my tears could speak....
They would say "I'm sorry when I was wrong
repair our relationship and make it strong"

If my tears could speak....
They would say "I hurt myself more when I hurt you,
believe me, this is true"!

If my tears could speak....
They would say "Forgive me please!"
relieve me from the bars of remorse, let my heart rest at ease"

If my tears could speak....
They would say "Your silence is killing me,
break your silence and let me free"

If my tears could speak....
They would say "I'm sorry for what I've said
I didn't really mean them when I've said"

If my tears could speak....
They would say "My excess love for you has hurt you this way
I shall not do it again, forgive me please and take this pain and guilt away"



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divya said...

superb.......i loved it......If my tears could speak....
They would say I hurt myself more when I hurt you......really veryy nice

⁂ܓVållῐ ⁂ܓ☺ said...

Thanx Dear..=]

Unknown said...

awhh ur poem can speak!...and it speaks a lot!!...
another nice poem valli :) :)

⁂ܓVållῐ ⁂ܓ☺ said...

ThanQ Anand...=]

smiling soul said...

what to say valli...:)

no words to express about ur poems...
really good to read ur feel..

keep writing & smiling :)

S said...

i think dis is wat everyone wants to express out bt couldn't and u have done it perfectly
it is a reflectn of my feelngs too :)

⁂ܓVållῐ ⁂ܓ☺ said...

Thanks for the read Sweeya :)

Vinay said...

Heart melting poem

Easwar Arumugam said...

Tears too speak sometimes. As usual, a nice, well composed poetry.

TTT said...

beautiful ! full of feelings !

Woman'n'Beyond said...

Wow! I loved the poem and the way it rhymed. Your choice of picture is so apt!

Bikram said...

True if tears could say .. but then sometimes tears are no good after the damage is done amd sometimes in relations we do that .. and then repent later ..

a thoughtful emotional poem

Bikram's

Krishna said...

only if I could speak

Krishna said...

Only If My Tears Could Speak

 

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