Friday, April 06, 2012

Hope





Candle hope

Extremely
depressed heart thinks of
suicide

But, somewhere
in corner of heart
there is hope

A tiny hope
which prompts "What if things
turn around!!?"

That tiny hope
created a great
difference!

Written for Haiku Heights



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blackandwhiteheart said...

a true, welcome and helpful difference... :)

one has to have hope, to get over with all the melancholy inside their heart and head.

nice post, Valli..

Regards,
jayanth

CYNOSURE said...

It always creates a difference...
nice one Valli... :)

Surbhi said...

very beautifully expressed valli ... so much of emotions and an awesome haiku :)

Pranita said...

Very nice... :)

Ramesh Sood said...

Indeed..gave a life..to be lived by being alive.. I liked the way you handled the prompt.. well done..

Ellecee said...

This is lovely, Valli. I like the last one that speaks about the hope that makes the difference. Thank you.

Sagittarian said...

Never lose HOPE..:) thanks for sharing..:)

Grace said...

And so it does..hope makes a big difference ~

Jeannette, said...

nice haiku! tiny hope creates a big difference..thanks for sharing..

Andy Sewina said...

Nicely - where there's life, there's hope!!

kalyan said...

i got this feeling once.... some years of hope just blowed that 1min of weakness...hope is great this haiku is a fact!

Magical Mystical Teacher said...

A little hope goes a long way!

Tell Me, Sister Crow

Pranabananda Jena said...

Lovely words and picture too. both are complimenting to each other and increasing intensity of the feelings you wanted to portray..
:-)

Blahblaholic ♥ © said...

I loved the picture and these lines.
Sometimes a tiny flicker of hope,makes us hold on. :)
x

alka narula said...

well , the use of word suicide was quite disturbing for me ...otherwise nicely written !

☂☆ Vållῐ ★♬ said...

Thanks for the read Jayanth,Cynosure,Surbhi,Pranitha,Rameshji,Ellecee,Sagittarian,Grace,Jeannette,Andy,Kalyan,MMT,Jena Nirati and Alka :)

Jake said...

Remember Valli. Hope is a good thing, maybe the best of things, and no good thing ever dies..

 

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