Friday, July 02, 2010

I miss you!






(Photo by Annika Svenmarck)

I miss those days when you called me with utmost love
You don't even bother to look at me now

I miss those days when you used to listen to stories I say
Now,You don't even bother to look at my way

I miss those days when you used to cheer my presence
Now,You've end up enjoying my absence

I miss those days when you considered me as your top priority
Now, I stand no where in your list

I miss those days when you loved to introduce me to your friends
Now, You just treat me like a stranger when they are around

I miss those days when you were always there for me,No matter what!
Now you don't even know that I exist

I miss those days when we both made this world feel jealous
Now, It's all 'Me' there is no 'Us'

I miss those days when you shared each and everything with me
Now, You've got too many friends to consider

I miss those days when you spoke nectar like words filled with innocence
Now, Every word you say hurts me in immense

I miss those days when you couldn't withstand my single drop of tear
Now, You don't even know that I'm crying

I miss those days when you've treated me just like an angel
Now, You've shown my way out from your heart's door

When there was 'Love' in your heart
You accepted me the way I was
And Now that love's gone!
You are looking for reasons to complain

How did you change so much leaving me without any clue?
You've hurt me a lot....Believe me it is true!

I miss you, I miss you to the core Not you,
The person you were before!



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mahesh said...

Awesome... I loved it..

εїз said...

Vry tuchin

Bhavishya said...

awesome :) love failure aa enti antha deep ga feel ayyi rasinattunnav :P

Valli said...

ThanQ Mahesh..:)

Prathi...ThanQ dear..:)

Bhavi...ThanQ Dear

kiran said...

wowwwwwwwwwww!!!!!!!!!!!!!.....
if i was with u..i wud have given u a warm hug...loved it so much... :)...
but i feel no one the earth shud ignore other person suddenly... :(...that whom we believe so much....

Valli said...

How sweet Kiran! >:D<
ThanQ..:)
I too wish the same...:'(

Keerthanatammana said...

I miss you...not you the person u wer b4 //

Akka Ppl who r suffering may B different...but the same pain...same feelings :(HatsOff akka...

Valli said...

ThanQ Keerthana

sanjana said...

absolutely true valli....u done a really good job

Valli said...

ThanQ Sanjana..:)

kRsNa said...

cute. :)

Valli said...

ThanQ kRsNa

Jyothi said...

I can feel the pain in each word you wrote in this article....
But....Just wanted to say you.... If it is love it will never go off....
People change.... Circumstances change.... Behavior changes but one's love is the only thing that can never change.... And if it changed its not love....
The way the Love is expressed might be changed....
But.... If it is Love it will never change....
Jyothi.

Valli said...

ThanQ Jyothi...

Wht you said is absolutely true..

Love never changes...If it does....Then it isn't love..

Rupam said...

Sad story but beautiful lines!
[my poetry at:http://diaryoffreedom.tk/]

Valli said...

ThanQ Rupam...:)

winds of time said...

:'( :'( :'( entoo ipdu chaduvtunte chala badaga undi :( :(

Painful words :(

Valli said...

winds of time

ThanQ

sun said...

its nce ..
intrusting bt also sad ..
its reality n reality is sad ..

its true ..
bt also hurts alot ..

de feeling behind it ..
wht cn i say ..
hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm ..
i just lv it ..

Valli said...

sun...

Yeah...what you said is right...
Sometimes...reality is so sad and bitter...

ThanQ for loving it..:)

neelu said...

hmm superb feelings....

Valli said...

Thanks Neelu :)

Simran said...

I'm speechless, Valli!

prasanb09 said...

was as if everything happening in front of my eyes, truly words of a dis-heartened soul... very nice, i loved it :)

⁂ܓVållῐ ⁂ܓ☺ said...

Thanks Simran, Prasanb

Leo said...

With time, even the love seems to change.. Very touching words.. You've a talent for directness in words I think :)

☂☆ Vållῐ ★♬ said...

Thanks for the read Leo :)

praneeth818 said...

good oneeee

Anonymous said...

>:D<


a Rat said...

very emotional. awesome write.. you are truly very expressive, valli..

sathish kumar said...

you broke my heart.
Poignant lines, straight from heart with soul.

mohamedali jinnah said...

I like this 'I miss you poem!'

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Anupama K. Mazumder said...

Such a sad poem: I hope its not true. It's indeed strange how relationships change.

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Shaivi said...

v good poem valli

TTT said...

happens ...very oft . very touching Valli .

Jay Singh said...

Hi Valli,

Lovely poem

Indeed, some days just never come back and all we can do is think about them and recall them from memories. Probably you should be on the lookout for the memory storing devices I spoke about in my blog :) They would help you out :)

Regards

Jay
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odyzz said...

it touched the chords deep inside...beautifully penned..

Zillion Dreams said...

lovely!

pranav said...

wonderful poem..

liked your blog too.

Saro said...

:)

Vishal Rathod said...

You have shown me the mirror. I am hugging my beloved right away. Lovely poem. GBY.

✿◕‿◕✿miss mermaid ✾◕‿◕✾ said...

true feelings akka poem is superb ...
wen dey ll know ur value n start missing u it ll b too late

 

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