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It was raining. She was preparing samosas in the kitchen. Her husband was watching cricket sipping a cup of tea. Her son ran hurriedly and took out her diary from the old rack and tore some pages. Some of her life secrets and memories are now floating away as paperboats. Wish those were bitter pages.
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something to hope for.. nice one Valli :)
WOW....That was short and crisp!
Yes..... Wish those we're bitter pages!!!
that was beautiful!
Very few words. But conveys so much. About how life changes... yet keeps going on... how time heals wounds... and how children teaches us to forgive and forget...
Remarkable one!
i too wish the same
I just loved what you wrote....it just has so much to say in so little words.
How touching!
Diaries with secrets need to be kept locked :)
very nice!
It reminds me of my childhood :)
Diares are treasure n few pages missing ia like heart sinking
Thoughtful!
Few words but they convey much...beautifully done... :-)
Good one , well told in few lines. :)
As good as your petry, Valli:)
Sometimes others feelings touch you very closely. Same happened to me after reading this.
Nice...
Very nice write up within a little words. :) Anil Sahu
Oh no..
I would not like pages torn off my diary even if they were bitter pages :(
but short and crisp story ..
Bikram's
wonderful expression......................