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How does it feel...
To stand like a stranger
in a place where you actually belong?
How does it feel...
To be silent lyrics of unheard pain
in the heart's sorrow song?
How does it feel...
To be an unexplored part,
like a hidden face of a fallen dice?
How does it feel...
To be a single ugly truth
standing naked among million lies?
How does it feel...
To be unrecognizable, like a drop
searching for its identity in the mighty ocean?
How does it feel...
To be away from the only person
who could read your silence and emotion?
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It's a very strong need: the need to belong. Nice lines that capture the depth of the need.
How much we long for that ONE !! ..beautifully expressed as always ! :)
I can totally relate to the firt stanza
When any one of them happens to us...that draws us back and deceive from the very moment... it feels lost, lonely and miserable... especially when the last one happens.
Touching!!
Its so beautiful, You have caught the pain and confusion of every soul who is different so beautifully. The strange feeling of un-belonging that creeps into one at such moments are incredible.
Oh Valli...this truly feels like a song of the heart. Sry for the late response. But better late than never. :)
outstanding write up...
What a lovely blog you have! Yes the feeling of loneliness is very disconcerting.
Very well written Valli! The desire to belong well expressed:)
That is a an amazing poem, thoughtful, filled with emotions and feelings , loved that :)
lovely poem Valli. longing emotions came out perfectly. :)
Beautiful as always ... your words emote a lot.
Very beautifully captured the need to belong! Lovely...
lovely ! last stanza awesome :)
expressions are innovative and yet it sounds simple and pure ... really good !
Wonderful lines..Kudos to you..:-)
Lovely lines...strong emotions.. beautifully conveyed.. :)
Beautiful Valli and coming from you after a long long time
I know how it feels!
A very meaningful and poignant composition Valli. Every para tells a story in itself.
Sorry for my somewhat prolonged absence btw dear, life keeps me on the treadmill all the time. But I see what I miss when I read compositions like this.
It's amazing to see how everything is so 'alive' on your blog! :D
Nice post too!
Very nice!
This one is good :) Last stanza very relatable!
I have felt what each of those lines speaks...
This is just so beautiful...
Reached my heart and touched it...
Very well expressed...
It feels like - "why that special one is not with me...?" :(
wow! great feelings valli ... :)