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Wish I remained as
caterpillar, because at
times beauty is bane!
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What are my wings for
when my freedom is broken?
Trapped butterfly sobs
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Lock beauty with eyes,
hurt not by grasping with hands;
Love wounds not freedom
A cage is still a cage, even if it is made of gold - Unknown
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The 2nd one is my favorite ... pain and loss illustrated poignantly !!!
It relates very well to the present condition of women in India
Perfect! I can somehow relate it to myself...I have a very atrocious experience of abusive relationship where I was mentally tortured for months, my freedom, space was snitched away..thankfully I m out.BTW love ur potrayal. :) <3
Lovely writing
I could almost hear the cry of the butterfly's struggle, Valli....sensitive, elegant and beautiful set:)
cool visual, poignant verse...nicely done :)
That is so touching poem to read.. So true how many a time beauty becomes a bane.
haiku thy master is valli....:)
trapped freedom..
beautifully expressed !!
Awesome as ever, Valli.
Beautiful.
Beautiful poem.
Such strong feelings conveyed there...
Loving it is!
Way to go...
Nice one Valli.
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What a touching portrayal of feeling!. i loved it all. From the choice of the picture to the creativity in ur composition...the font of the words...everything. Wow!
Not qualified to comment on Haiku, but these three are really touching pieces. Great read.
poor butterfly , she has to be free, SO BEAUTIFUL POST ;)
Lock beauty with eyes... lovely words, Valli:)
The final statement "A cage is still a cage even if it is made of gold" .. This line supports ur writing so much!
Good one :)
wonderful.. the woe of pseudo freedom.! lovely!
The first one caught my fancy.
Poignant but speaks of reality. There are poeple out there who are or feel trapped in many ways.
Such a sensitive and thought provoking post !
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Emotional take on women's plight.
Very nice poem!!!!
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Your thoughts are beautiful. :)
Many of us could probably ask what our wings are for...
Butterfly
Firstly, I love the blog theme.. its all cutesy and sparkly hahah...
Now the haiku you have created are painful but true..
http://unshakenthoughts.com/2013/04/02/to-catch-a-butterfly/
Excellent set. Very well crafted
I like the way you give human thoughts to the butterfly. Vivid.
Brilliant. All three of them. Also the quote at the end is so true.
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Wonderful haiku... I love the way you conveyed the ideas and imagery.
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Thanks for the read Everyone :)
Read and re-read... how true!
Great lines Valli, keep writing.