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Fingers on torch; white
rays turned red, Child amused when
he saw it first time
Chillies looking hot
Its color tempting me lot
taste buds warn "Try not!"
Pretty girl in white
takes off red umbrella to
feel the joy of rain!
A smile lit up his
face, while reading letter with
lipstick impressions
Written for Haiku Heights
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Wow ... loved the red haiku :-)
Again a lovely poem Valli very nicely written.
You give life to mundane things :)
Different emotions - Nice penned. :)
lovely feel good haiku !! loved d simplicity :)
First two are very creative take on the prompt and my favourite too.
Wow! Loved the chilies one! :D
wow!Nicely portrayed:)
Nice haiku simple and effective
Valli... I loved all the Haikus... Watta compilation!!!
Awesome :-):-):-)
Once again nice one Valli .
Interesting take on RED! First one reminded me of childhood...:) Nice set indeed!:)
wow ! i especially loved the first one ...
Beautiful reds..but, the last one is my fave :))
Wow...really cool. very nicely described
very nicely written valli
keka :)
Wow those were amazing haikus! All were equally wonderful. Thanks for spreading the love with red :)
Valli...u again mske me speechless from all ur Haiku..loved l of them and truly m learing from u :-)
What a pleasure to read these Haiku. I loved them all; the first two are my favourites :-)
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Lovely haikus! I love the way you combine the whites and reds. And the love letter is so sweet!
The RED compositions are vibrant ..loved them all :)
These are all great, but I loved that third one.
the one last stole my heart :)
I liked all of them. The chilli one, the pretty girl one are really interesting. The last one is vivid. :)
I love the one about the seductive lipstick impressions!
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What I like best is how visual the effect--favorite: putting away the red umbrella--
literally vivid, symbolically peace follows alarm!
I liked the second one.. amazingly creative and very beautiful.. first has its own value..of course..
RS:)
I love the first haiku. perfect
loved the simplicity of the first Haiku, it conveys the curiosity of childhood beautifully... we both seemed to have drawn inspiration from chillies:) loved your take on it.
You did a lovely job with the range of haiku created. ;-)
Eliz