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“Both! Come here! Get your observations signed!” sir called us. “Where is your place? Why aren’t you doing experiment with your batch?” he asked “I went there to borrow pencil Sir” I replied while he was correcting. Amused when I saw ‘Not doing the experiment!’ remark along with his sign. “Schools were better!” I thought.
P.s. I don't write prose often, this is my first attempt on writing a story in 55 words. Your suggestions or feedback are most welcome ☺
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I think writing 55 fiction is difficult & challenging. Nice one for a first attempt! School days were of course better!:)
Very good attempt....you must write prose also.
Yeah, school days are better, more carefree. Sweet read Valli :)
nice one valli gaaru baagaa raasaaru in 55 words keep it up
Good job and since u r at inception I think u have done justice :)
good one Valli . write these more often .
Hi Valli,
I would say childhood was even better than school days. No tensions :)
keep up the good work Valli, you're only going to get better at it. :)
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Jay
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Reminds me of the flirting college days when on the pretext of borrowing a pen or pencil one used to move to the other group. :)
Yes, school was so much better
Hi Valli,
Nice write up:) A smiley for you *:)* and a *thumbs up* for school life:)
College days, School days, Golden life anyways!
Hi valli good try and you have done it well :)I have a doubt, did u say abot life in engineering college ;) I felt it happened in my life..
haha schools were better lol :-) interesting, Valli.. even i had similar thought process during my first year.. 55 fiction..you're good andyou should try your hands more often at it too..
CUTE :D reminds of everybody's college life isnt it :D?
Lovely...school days were so innocent. Nicely penned...keep writing prose as well, valli.
Very unique. You should come up with more Valli.. very nice.
I guess 55 word fiction can best be written when it relates to real life incident. Nice one :)