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When my love tune
couldn't touch your heart's core
When my love key
couldn't open your heart's door
Feelings in our heart never resonate
and my mute love doesn't reciprocate...
It is like a wordless song
with the lyric of silence
It is like a mute sound
of one hand clapping
Feelings are deep with the rhythm of void
But sadly, they go unheard forever...
Telugu version of this poem: Here
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Well written.
Nice! When these emotions occur, it is the time to let go! :)
It's sad when feelings go unheard !!!
loved it :) very true!!
Sad yet beautiful. I could very well relate to this poem, Valli. Wonderfully expressed emotions. :)
summary of a book in just few lines. Touched.
Aahh!!! Valli That is very poignant.
Let's hope that the feelings are heard by the best ears
<3 it! Awesome!
So sad but so soulful ~
Soulful...it reminded me of one of Amrita Pritam's lines..."I feel that my entire life is a love letter written to you...if anyhow it reaches you someday...I will no longer have the dependency of words"
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I agree Valli because I have felt it..well written as usual..visiting you ;)
Absolutely bang on! Touched my heart!
Intense ....
Poignant! Beautiful!
wonderful one Sri.. I really liked all those oxymorons, wordless song, lyric of silence, mute sound and one hand clapping...Beautiful
Beautiful and poignant...the rhythm in your poem is really amazing..:)
Nice post,
your blog really looks awesome.
keep it up
very beautifully written...and a gr8 blog too...:)
Expressed well...
Wow!! you have conveyed the emotions so wonderfully.. :)
your poem has a mesmerizing effect on me.. I loved this.. :))
Lovely words, Valli:)
life is not always a fairy tale..and such emotions leave a deep scar on ur heart...but the best way to get rid of these feelings is to think, whatever happens is always for the best!
I love the way your poem rhymes in the first stanza, very well written, Valli!
Love belongs to the heart and its hard to describe in words. Sometimes its just painful when such feelings are kept unvoiced.
honestly sad when emotions and love go 'unheard'---how did i miss this!
sorry for stepping in late, valli! lovely...
Poem is very nice.
your website is colorful, looks good...
Keep it up.
Hi! I am first timer on your blog, beautiful! Music couldn't be more apt, a treat to senses!!!
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You made my eyes wet. Well said.
Love that doesn't reciprocate has no value at all. But dat doesn't mean the love was ever false.
Realised one thing,.
Love the one who deserve and accept you,rather than waiting.
Keep writing
It is time to break free then.
I dunno wat to say...
Just AWESOME