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A rainbow
seems colorless to
her sad eyes
---x---
Lonely girl
looks for someone to
paint her world
Written for Haiku Heights, Tackle it Tuesday
{Feelings extracted from my heart and painted as poetry art!}
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Rainbow seemed colorless...
I loved this line!!!!
The 2nd stanza blew me off ... amazing !!!
The first one is clear and lovely example ~
Nice set ~
I wonder what would happen if lonely girl would pick up a brush and paint her own world...
A Long Loneliness
True, colors fade when we feel lonely. Hope she finds someone soon :-)
Oh my. Your haiku for loneliness is incredibly powerful. Made me tear up and catch my breath.
We all need someone to help colour our world - and it seems so hard to find someone with the right palette...
how beautifully you have imagined and painted your haiku...loved it..
These are fine lines.
Valli ... this is such a pleasure to read these haiku ... really wonderful.
loved the easy flow! amazing valli!
I can totally feel her...
I liked the rainbow one - communicates the feeling so well visually.
Particularly loved the rainbow one ... so true...
The second one is my choice of the two ...
September Heights - Vanished Spring
Both are lovely..deep and touchy..
lovely!(though lonely:))
Haiku with tender feelings,valli.
wow ...i can feel the pain and loneliness.
Good one... enjoyed reading your blog post... keep them coming
a gray rainbow.... very thoughtful haiku, and a bit sad, as despair is prone to be!
Hi, you people are good. keep sharing.