Valli's blog 
(Photo by Eredel)
Soaked paper boat drowns
with pride, Happy being cause
for many broad smiles
:) :) :)
Life of paper boat
so short! But, it echoes joy
that forever lasts!
Written for Haiku Heights
Tuesday, September 25, 2012
Life of paper boat....
(Photo by Eredel)
Soaked paper boat drowns
with pride, Happy being cause
for many broad smiles
:) :) :)
Life of paper boat
so short! But, it echoes joy
that forever lasts!
Written for Haiku Heights
i ♥ comments ツ
Subscribe to:
Post Comments
(
Atom
)
About me
I am a black and white rainbow with the colours concealed within ♥ A person who fancies stars in daylight ♥ A person who cherishes tiny sweet moments of life and a great lover of nature, music and art ♥
Join me at
Subscribe via Reader
Add A Bookmark!!
Liked my blog ? Press Ctrl+D (Bookmark) and come back again!! 
Stop plagiarism!
Template by:
39 Comments ♥ ツ
Post a Comment
Thanks for commenting on my space :) Please do not spam!
Paper boats are sheer Joy!
Nice, keep writing... :)
True to the core, Valli. Exquisite depiction
Wow! what a thought! Very nice, Valli:)
Beautiful and meaningful. :)
Touched the heart Valli..many memories refreshed..liked it very much..
Lovely 2nd stanza ... a paper boat always brings smile to our faces ... well done !!!
Good haiku Valli :)
The lines evoke the memories of paper boats made in childhood :)
Keep posting :D
Regards
Jay
http://road-to-sanitarium.blogspot.in/
Absolutely lovely lines. Hugs :D
well honed words
adding meaning
at various levels...lovely, Valli!
Paper boats! <3 :) :) :)
Oh the joy of making paper boats !!!!
This is sweet!:)
Second haiku is lovely...
beautifull emotions...
"drowns with pride" . . .unique take. I like it.
it is beautiful and profound.. good work :)
I think you have caught the essence of paperboats in these haiku. Very nice.
Your words are so true, a lovely description of paper boats and the joy they bring.
The life of your paper boat makes me smile.
beautiful!!! :)
Indeedy!!! Well done Valli :)
:
My paperboat, sails in your heart!
Sad and hopeful at the same time; I like "echoes joy that forever lasts".
About the short life of paper boats, I still keep one my grandma made for me many years ago, one of my treasures (I haven't put it in water!)
:)
Lovely! A trip down memory lane to childhood!! Joyful!
A lovely set
Beautiful!!!
..words are few..but very very powerful..
..keep it up Valli..loved it.. :)
Thats a very thoughtful poem! Deep!
So much pink bubbling everywhere, I feel like I've entered my niece's room..!! :D
Nice words..!!
Both verses are beautiful but combined together they are on another level.
Yes it is, and the boats have to sail together. Those which get wet in the rains will need a helping hand :)
I'm glad that there is a lasting echo to the paper boat that was lost long ago...
Paper Boat
Lovely take of the prompt, and so true of paper boats.
That's damn beautiful valli :):)
Vallikutty..Just loved ths one..:)
Wow.. simply brilliant lines. :)Indeed the paper boat has a short and sweet life and in that short lifetime, it gives us a happy moment. Lovely poetry! :)
Lovely lines(so true also), Lovely picture too. :)
Paper boats are so iconic. Lovely photo..
nice one