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Are words required?
When two hearts speak
in silence
Written for Haiku Heights, OSI
{Feelings extracted from my heart and painted as poetry art!}
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Lovely and soft ... purity and warmth personified :-)
This is just a soupcon of meaning, as the Buddha nature of the partially open lid of a can of brown beans carries meaning; but as a trope it just is seen to have a deeper meaning I think :)
I don't agree on calling this communication style 'futile words'....however, sounds lovely
nice one!
3 lines speaking a lot.....
Good one..and all the best
I have to say you are one of the best Haiku poets around!
@Green Speck
Thank you so much :)
@Bruce
Thanks for the read and sharing your opinion : )
@Joanne
In general, words aren't frutile....But only in such special cases where words aren't required to get the meaning....
@Sandra
Thank you so much :)
@Hemant
Thanks for the read :)
@Purple Mist
Thanks for your words...But I think, still I'm in a learning stage :)
I understand what Joanne is trying to say here. I agree with her. Maybe you can use another words instead.
You are trying to say this, right? You don't need to know the meaning of some words or words need not be spoken when hearts speak in silence. Maybe you can write it this way
no need for words
when two hearts speak
in silence
I hope you like my version. Just sharing my thoughts.
BTW, wonderful insight! :-)
Thanks for your opinion and suggestions Christine I loved your version :) Thanks for sharing :)
Beautiful!!!
There is great meaning in the silences of two souls who love each other.
Meaning in Shadows
I do agree with Christine and Joanne in a way.. Silence isn't always a viable option. It can misunderstand too... But perhaps, there are multiple angles one can take this.. so to each, their own..? I can also imagine this in a romantic way.. two hearts understanding each other without words.
Nicely said.
Melanie
Thanks for your comments and suggestions everyone! :)