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Cactus...
Tagged distinct prickly ugly plant
But, survives even if the soil is so dry
survives even if the sky doesn't cry
Burning heat, biting cold or heavy rain doesn't change her state
Extremes of any season doesn't change her fate
There's no wanting for others, to care for her
She doesn't look for spring, although she slowly withers
Struggles on her own to mark her existence
Protects herself from enemies, Her prickly thorns are her fence
Loner, stands alone in the corner, rooted deeply
When birds accompanies other tender flowery plants, She has no envy
Stands independent always, Isn't she a plant of real strength and real beauty?
Written for One Single Impression, Poetry Jam
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You know what, i would have never thought of writing about cactuses! That's the beauty of your blog, unusual topics expressed so creatively! Lovely poem!
Real strength and real beauty - well defined here. Excellent work.
cool use of this metaphor...so visual!
How lovley..beautiful... I invite you to my OSI post too..
A very nice poem which describes the attributes of the cactus so well.
Eileen
Well done!
Nice thoughtful poem!:)
Truly a writer can write on anything, u have described d beauty of an abandoned plant so well.
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Mani
marvelous lines Valli.... You poetry is ..is.. is... jusssst remarkable.... :)
I can be compared to a cactus. Pathetic in appearance yet astounding in quality.
Hey! i so love the template of your blog. Where did you discover this?> SO pretty ♥ I as well like the first one...
Lovely poem :)
I think we should take an inspiration from this poem. Superb writing!
Wow.. a poetry on cactus.. could never even think of it..and you did a great job here.. Lovely! :)
I live in the Sonora Desert. I could not agree more!
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interesting beautiful thoughts!
Very nice poetry and nice thinking!
excellent poetry! valli wow!
beautiful...
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Lovely thought flow...liked it.
Very well rhymed. I love this poem about the cactus.
Thorny cactus has become beautiful with your decorative - truthful words.
Keep it up!
Ranjani
Interesting click,,, awesome write-up :)
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Nice unique perspective:)
Brilliant work!
superb description...... i love it.......
lovely......
Excellent metaphor!
Dare to be different, be strong and envy not!
A small poem with a big message.
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