Tuesday, May 08, 2012


Photo by Puvi Joshi (Mint Icetea Photography)

A numb feeling towards joy
crushing the blooming buds of joy

Engulfing negativity,
consuming all the darkness;
Creating vacuum in the heart's alley,
Blocking possible paths of happiness

Feeling left alone..
Like a black sheep among white
Feeling lost... Lost like a star at the corner,
blinking with the pale light

Life seems so worse
feeling bitten by the snake of curse
Life seems so worse
feeling vague like the pointless verse

Now, the sight of rose
cheers not
But, its underlying thorn
pricks a lot

Eyes deny to cherish
rainbow full of colors
Heart deny to replenish
wasted sad, gloomy and empty hours

Lips slowly forget
how do they actually smile
they begin to wear 'silence'
and unspoken words form a pile

venomous thoughts evolve
from the crust of tormented heart
Hope dies and dissolves
and thoughts of suicide start..

Written for One Single Impression

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sridhar said...

loved it...specially the last one...and to add to it depression is something that will make u feel lonely even in a crowd

Sagittarian said...

All true, but what matters most is were able to cope all those feeling for us to survive in life's journey..:) Hope all is well my sweet Valli!:) More hug:)

Ruchi Jain said...

so true poem ,and exactly it happens in the depression , negativity enters very much,,

The Write Girl said...

This poem is beautiful and very sad too. You evoke the pain of depression very well.

Rahul Bhatia said...

A sad weave:(

S Jayanth said...

INTENSE...!!! this is absolutely wonderful...the "rose" verse is the best..!!! Oh.. i love this poem..
thank you..! :)

Tarang Sinha said...

Poignantly beautiful description of Depression!

CYNOSURE said...

Every bit of it...so beautifully described...loved it... :)

Simran said...

Explosive post !
I mean ...feelings are out burst
Beautiful !

✿Sie✿ said...

you have penned it so nice Valli..I hope you're ok and this poem is not pertaining on your feelings now..if yes then Valli Hold on..every pain will pass..*hugs*

☂☆ Vållῐ ★♬ said...

Thanks for the read Sridhar, Sagittarian, Ruchi, The Write Girl, Rahulji, Jayanth, Tarang, Cynosure, Simi and Sie :)

ArtMuseDog and Carol said...

wonderful poem ~ do hope it is not you who is depressed ~ sending healing energy and lots of healing hugs just because ~ thanks, namaste, ^_^

Subhorup Dasgupta said...

Lovely lines, captures the bitter sweet feelings of despondency so perfectly.

♫♪♥PhilO♥♪♫ said...

Depression does leave a person totally empty, and the feeling sucks!
Well put :)

Harshad mehta said...

Here is complete picture of depression! I love lines about sight of rose. Excellent work.

⁂ܓVållῐ ⁂ܓ☺ said...

Thanks for the read :)

Piphi / Prateek Kunwar said...

It's a curse i wouldnot want even on my worst enemy. But It can be beaten !


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