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Sad, deserted and
lonely heart longing to drench
in raindrops of love
And the rain falls...
Raindrops of love heals
those wounds of emptiness; And
the heart blooms with joy!
Written for Haiku Heights
{Feelings extracted from my heart and painted as poetry art!}
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A great love story weaved here.. lovely..
good one.. :)
my entry for the same prompt :
http://blackandwhiteheart.wordpress.com/2012/04/02/mine-self-exile-haiku-3/
I hope it always blooms with joy~
I hope the heart always blooms with joy ~
lovely haiku...excellent... :)
"the heart blooms with joy" Such a nice line. I enjoyed both of your haiku today.
loved it:)
Delightful, loving and insightful haiku ~thanks, namaste, ^_^
Dramatic use of the word "drench"! Adds a powerful feel to the haiku!
hoping for those love raindrops to last ;)
so true...love heals when we feel deserted...
nice haiku...
Beautiful haiku!:)
Raindrops of love have a healing effect
May the deserted heart always be drenched with the raindrops of love!
Deserted Branches
Lovely and romantic!
The best one of yours !
Great set of haiku. In a few words you write a wonderful love story.
Namaste
Thanks for the read Rameshji,Jayanth,Grace,Cynosure,Invisible silence,Ellecee,Carol,Gemma,Sie,Jeanette,Tarang,Rahulji,Magical Mystical Teacher,Karen, Simi and Chev :)
And thn the rain again leaves u...for a longer time..u need to wait for rain to come back again..the poem is less about love and more about hope....nice attempt...small and beautiful with lots of meaning.
Yup!..True Hemant...Thanks for the read :)
Its so beautiful Valli...