Sunday, January 15, 2012

Wounding myself...






(Photo by Amelie)

If I bloom a bud into flower by wounding its petals
The flower loses its strength and natural beauty
If you love me when I plead you to love me
Your love is encapsulated with sympathy
And
Pleading you forever becomes my duty

Moral: Don't force things to happen. A natural occurrence has beauty and strength and will last for longer period.



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SRV_sourav said...

nice way of explaining the fact dat never force anyone to love u...shows dat u too mi8 have faced des things in ur life or must have seen such things happening around u...

Siny U K Nair said...

unacceptable truth :(

Vijay Shenoy said...

Unspoken Truth About Love!

Rahul Bhatia said...

Beautiful words and the ending is lovely!

PhilO♥ said...

"wounding myself" could be a nice one.
The lines were lovely. But then it is difficult. Sometimes we become so dependent on a person, that we cannot help but keep longing for that one person..though yes, in the end, we just lose ourselves..

Sri Valli said...

Thanks for the read Siny, Just life, Rahul, Philo :)

PhilO♥ said...

Thank You for the comment :) Even your posts are mature :P

Kalyan said...

@valli its excellent!! love needs the force from inside....

Sri Valli said...

Kalyan...exactly..thanks for the read :)

Preeti S. said...

Short and thought-provoking. Loved it.

P.S. - Beautiful blog. :D

Beyond Horizon said...

Somethings better arrive in our life when they are meant to be. Loved the title :)

Sri Valli said...

Thanks for the read Enigmatic Soul, Poonam :)

smiling soul said...

wonderful thought :)

Sri Valli said...

Thanks for the read Soumya

Sankara Jayanth S said...

absolute masterpiece!

 

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