Feeling

Friday, July 15, 2011

Feeling

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Feeling void, like the holes
Feeling dissatisfied, With unreached goals
Feeling helpless, Like flower being crushed
Feeling oblivious, With several thoughts being rushed
Feeling hopeless, like the bud that dried at early stage
Feeling homeless, With escape thoughts like that of parrot in the cage

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Fatima said...: Nice rhyming...

Take Care; July 16, 2011 at 3:33 PM
Anonymous said...: Feeling ecstatic reading those thoughtful rhyming verses...wonderful work dear!! I hope those are not real, are they?; July 16, 2011 at 3:36 PM
kiran said...: when evr i come here..i read my own feeling ...soooperb valli :); July 17, 2011 at 12:43 PM
Blasphemous Aesthete said...: It looks incomplete, where is the closure? There's only rife.

Regards,
Blasphemous Aesthete; July 17, 2011 at 8:18 PM
⁂ܓVållῐ ⁂ܓ☺ said...: Fatima,Fiducia,Kiran,Blasphemous Aesthete
Thanks for the read :); July 20, 2011 at 10:53 AM
Cynthia said...: a beautiful [and truthful]
melancholy quality that I love.; July 24, 2011 at 4:10 AM
Sri Valli said...: Thanks Cynthia :); July 25, 2011 at 12:31 PM
Anonymous said...: like't sweety <3; February 16, 2012 at 12:51 PM
⁂ܓVållῐ ⁂ܓ☺ said...: Thanks Anonymous; February 16, 2012 at 5:09 PM
Locomente said...: Thats so straight from the heart...
And only we girls can feel all these at the same time!; December 5, 2012 at 10:32 AM