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She pretends to be strong,
holding immense pain for so long
She masks her original side
though her heart is burning inside
She restrains those uncontrollable tears
through her bold and fake smiles
But if you look deeply into her eyes
You will notice that her heart still cries!!
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Super valli :)
@winds of time
Thanks for the read
loved ur stricken lines.. expressed beautifully
lovely....there is so much i can writew here ryt now...could connct so deeply....but well m out of ryt words now...just loved it...:)
lovely poem dear...the emotions expressed through these words are immense!
Good read...
Take Care.
just like u wrote on me ..
Very sweet tho'
Itz tuf 2 luk deep into smeone'z Eyez whoz farAway ;) so gueZz u wud share dem...as i can neva makeit out :(
@some unspoken words
Thanks for the read
@vaisakhi
Oww....It's sad that you connect to this bitter poem....:(
thanks for the read
@Fatima..
Thanks re....:D
@Naaz..
You could relate to it na..:(
Sad :(
@QTie...^_^ so glad...you wanna look look into my eyes
Hey, Hi
well that was so beautifully penned...loved it...the end was so beautifully woven...nicew...real nice..
Regards,
The Silhouette...
Thanks for the read Eon
Nuvvena aa "She"....
Anyway good one..Short and good..
Yeah Neeth...
Thanks for the read..:)
Yeah Neeth...
Thanks for the read..:)
That's so sad - and you're right - the eyes always give it away. Good job Valli!! :)
Thanks Louise
Sad though..well xpressed..:)
I love your instant rhyming words :)