(Image taken from here)
I wonder why people are fond of moon over stars
though it has invisible hidden scars
It changes its shape with the time and the season
Don't know what might be the reason
It is sometimes white, sometimes yellow
It never has the same original glow
It glows, stealing the radiance of the mighty sun
Stars have individuality, they don't depend on anyone
They shine with their own spark
They glitter like tiny lamps in the dark
Yes, stars are in million, Moon is unique and one
But, Moon got so much praise because stars are in million
Without stars, just imagine the sky!
'Ahh! It is incomplete!' I guess you would reply!!
P.s: This poem is just for fun...I am not against moon lovers..:P
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Hey, Hi
if not your paintings, even your verses are beautiful...
its a good thought that you have portrayed here...i liked the way you have put it...the expressions...lovely...sweet and simple...yet enchanting...
regards,
The Silhouette..
hahahha..valli...
nice one..
i donno the reason but i am in love wth moon... :):)
That's a good poem .. :D nd yeah.. evn i wonder.. y evry1 praise moon.. :) !!
I love the rhymings in ur poems :) simple n cute.. :)
ThanQ Silhouette...Glad that you found it enchanting...
ThanQ Kiran...Haha...I too like moon ...But love stars more than moon
ThanQ Madhumathi...Haha...Bingo and Hi-Five then...
I Loved eur poem bt I <3 mOOn too its doesnt mean I dunn lOv3 starS awww goD I hav many lOves :P
Keerthana...Hahaha..:D
Thanks for the read :)
Hey it was a wonderful poem, on subject that I'm too fond off !
You know this poem can be understood in the direct manner too and it's got a more amazing meaning, as in looking at life and people in the context of moon and the stars !
Wonderfully written.
Keep writing :)
Take Care.
Hey ThanQ Fatima....
It's very good to hear that we can connect some points from this poem to life and ppl...:D
I so love the moon. But I have nothing against your poem as well. :)
hi valli.
nice poem. i also love your template. i'm not good with animations. hehe. have a nice day. :)
Yesha..ThanQ :)
Nika...ThanQ :)
Moon Uses Sun[which is also a star] to shine.. like moon there are some people also :P
Cherry!
I agree! :D
Thanks for the read!
Haha...Good one...
bagundi valli
ThanQ Praneeth!
sweet poem valli :o)
Anynoymous(Naaz)
ThanQ dear
hey valli your pencil speaks omgnly in painting as well as in writing too.everything ur feelings,the way of writing,the way of rhyming,the way of designing ur blog was fantastic, its superb , amazing enchanting. I dont have words to describe that how good it was. well will u teach me that how do u design ur blogs??? plzzz
ThanQ so much
"some unspoken words"
About what you wanna learn?
I didn't design blogs....But I used some javascripts searching from google..and from various sources
Hey you got a beautiful blog..and the liveliness is incomparable..the poem is so true but everything has its own justified position.
i love the moon though :)
Alcina...ThanQ :]
Keep visiting
hmm about ur pencil and heart icon i wana know vaali.
@some unspoken words
I got those cursors form cursors-4u.com site dear :]
oh thanks for the link vali :). soon i shall goona to apply it on my blog page.have a look and tell me hows that looking. -:)
OHkie...Welcome :]
Beautiful Blog with a wonderful post:)
Keep Writing :D
ThanQ Simran :]
Keep visiting my blog
nice thoughts!
ThanQ Sajeev :)
beautiful valli...just day before yesterday i wrote something on moon...when i saw ur post in indivine
first click & rushed to see ur thoughts which is really worth ...
:)
Hehe Thanks a lot Sowmya :)
yeaaaaa ! a very good thought valli !! even moon lovers may b confused whether to cntinue on their same fav moon or to go wid ur stars :P
Hehe..Thanks for the read Sweeya :)
Hey nice one....Personally I like stars more than moon...:)
Himani
Once again a nice one from you , This time it was comparison between two large bodies in heaven. All this happens because of uniqueness moon has over stars . Thats my reply
perfect :) i mean its an incredible way to brought out the real life scenario of humans with d metaphor of stars and moon,,,brilliantly penned :)
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Just wow! What you have written is nothing we don't know already but it hasn't struck our minds until now! It easily relates to the people around us! Truly good poem!! :)
Lovely poem..Super like..:-)
Nice, be original and be unique. :)
PS: I love both moon and stars. :P
Hmm! Nice poem. I do know the reason and the reason why everybody loves moon is because:
TAARE ZAMEEN PAR hain! lol
twinkling starts have their own charm against moon who sometimes even fails to keep date.
But when moon is shining in its full glory in the sky, Yo can't help but admire its beauty, stars just pale in comparison.
Yo have written very well! I liked this thought!!
so you are someone who prefers a starry night than a moon-lit one? Your blog template answers it I believe! I see some sparkling stars on the dark skies! :)
Superb...!
what a comparison :)
stars as in your blog's background ? :P
hehe...although its for fun...but it was good...
loved the last two... :)