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I'm a butterfly with battered wings
I'm a violin with the broken strings
I'm a bell that never rings
I'm like an empty swaying swings
I'm a starless sky
I'm a truth within a lie
I'm the weakest link of the broken chain
I'm a terrible loss within a gain
I'm a rose that fades
I'm a color without any shades
I'm an unsolved puzzle
I'm a drop less drizzle
I'm a speechlessI parrot
I'm a missing card in a tarot
I'm a rainbow without colors
I'm a spring without flowers
I'm a dance which has no grace
I'm a song that has no steady rhythm or pace
I'm a smile less face
I'm an affection less embrace
I'm a toy that lost its charm and good look
I'm a word less empty notebook
I'm a journey that has no destination
I'm a survey that yields no estimation
I'm a greeting without a note
I'm an empty traveling boat
I'm a lock with the missing key
I'm a fruitless mango tree
I'm a conversation without a cheerful talk
I'm an empty blackboard without a mark of chalk
I'm an ornament that lost its shine
I'm a knot that does not combine
I'm an echo which has no replication
I'm a mirror which shows no reflection
I'm a vehicle that has no wheel
I'm an empty cassette that has no reel
I'm a poem that has no feeling
I'm a quote that has no meaning
I'm an artist who lost her skill
I'm an enthusiast who lost all her will
I'm dreamer who got lost in her way
I'm a poor girl who looks for stars in a day
I'm a girl who is still a mystery file
I'm a girl who lost her true smile
I am girl who is just Incomplete!!
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WOW !!!!
Thanq Pranab
That was a wonderful poem Valli...described the feeling of being and feeling incomplete beautifully !
Take Care,
Fatima
very nice i must say....
Valli thats was beautifully written but to be honest is triggered the blues :(
was depressing and lacking hope.. I would just say- hope its a fiction and if its otherwise.. I wish the phase to pass over soon.. Take care buddy
Fatima...
ThanQ :)
Arslan...
ThanQ
Deepika...
Yeah...I'm in depressed mood...so writing such stuff...Thanks for your wishes dear...:)
Hey, Hi
Well, sorry for being late.. :(
that was nicely written...the thought was beautiful...
Feeling the blues?? try to splash it out on the canvas...its so much better...
Regards,
The Silhouette...
ThanQ
The Silhouette..:)
Wonderful - that what i could exclaim ! Beautiful thought flow conjured with words .. Although at times it just seemed that words could have woven in a more crisp way , yet the simplicity and direct-from-heart words covers it up ! Great work , keep going ! :)
ThanQ Ice..:)
My feelings are my inspiration to write..:)
sad but superbbb!! :)
ThanQ Sakhii..:)
akka its awesome touched akka love u lot n lot...u may nt b incomplete fo eurself...bt u r gr8est inspiration for many of us muahhhhhhhhh
Haha...ThanQ Keerthana
really nice poem.. :) :) and a very cute, sweet nice blog.. :) :)
Thanks Arpitha :)
This is *SO* beautiful. Beyond amazing.
WOW <3
Thanks for visiting my blog. Liked your Facebook Page, looking forward to reading more of awesometastic posts :D
Thank you so much blahblaholic :)
Thanks for following too :)
I think I might use this poem for an assignment at schoool, its so good and definiately what i'm looking for.
Wow!! Just a Wow :)
favrt- I'm a missing card in Tarot.
disagree- I'm a poem that has no feeling.
Comment- Superb analogies.
Query- How do you get such beautiful ideas along with such nice rhymes???
Kudos!!!
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Beautiful expression of feelings:)
Hi Valli,
Superb, a girl who feels incomplete finds solace in the comfort of these beautiful words strung together by you.
Loved this one :)
Regards
Jay
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Oh, such a sad poem...
Although I am your new follower , but this is not the way you write. As the name suggests something is missing and incomplete. And I feel that is your smile when you write from the soul. Any ways words and comparisons were awesome.
I have been reading your blog for a while and I like your writings interesting.
Thanks.
In this poem you can feel the aura of - happiness!Lovely!
Nicely written but a really sad poem.
everything is incomplete in this world !!!! and may be that what makes world unique !!!! perfectly in imperfect :D ,,,,nice poetry as always ,,hope u r in a much better joyfull mood now dan wen u wrote dis pensive poetry :)
How, a girl who is all these things, can be 'just incomplete'? :). Indeed women are mystery. Beautifully written.
i always enjoy ur soothing music :))
nice read
Valli, I very much appreciate the poetic lines. However, I do think that there's no one incomplete. God has blessed every human being with so much abundance.
u always amazed me by ur poems...
so beautiful... :)
Its awesome, your magnified observation is flawless, you are blessed with an eye that beauty wishes for, I'll certainly take out time to read all your creativity.
Master piece