Those wounds never heal,
which cut our heart deeply
with words that hit like an arrow
Those gaps never seal
established in our heart, wounded irrevocably
Time goes on, But those gaps never get narrow
{Feelings extracted from my heart and painted as poetry art!}
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Damn true :( Some empty space can never be filled .. I just loved the last line a lot , its so true , and painful too ..
ThanQ Aarti..:)
Seems to be u are going very deep...
ThanQ Praneeth!
bored to write the same word excellent again and again.. :P :)
Hehe...Kiran...ThanQ :D
True words in ur poem.. :) good one!
ThanQ Madhu..:)
yeah...sometimes it's so hard to let go of certain things!
thumbs-up to dis one! :)
THE DELUSIONAL REALITY
ThanQ :)
gud 1 :)
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Seems to be u are going very deep...
+1
:P :P
How true!
Shail...:)
Thanks for your comment..:)
Sad but true. The misery phase clings on to one and feeds on all the feelings possible.
The only thing left behind are emotional scars that never heal.
Hairyman...Yeah exactly..:)
poignant... and btw is the sequel between posts intentional!!?
Those unkind words of friends
are more severe than the bullets of foes
true..like they say, a cup once broken can be stuck, but the crack will always be there...nice!
True! I loved the way you rhymed it!
Meenakshi, The Little Princess, Indian Satire, Sathish
Thanks for the read :)
@Sathish..Nope it was just a coincidence...
very true
Oh this is very heart wrenching.Can't we make efforts to get out of this mode?Some wounds are deep as you say but time will heal with some help from us.