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I'm wandering soul
unaware of my goal
roaming here and there
unclear thoughts taking me nowhere :'(
I'm searching for stars in the day
In the night sky, I'm waiting for the rainbow to lay
I'm living in my own world of dreams
Everything over there, So beautiful it seems
I'm not ready to wake up and see
Breaking my illusions and setting myself free
And feel the ugly truth's essence
which has got the bitter reality's presence
No wonder, Some dreams are better than reality
Soothing to mind with no emotional calamity
But dreams are not forever, Wish they would be!
Because one fine day, I need to wake up,realize and see
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Asalways rocking..
ThanQ Praneeth!
simply superb n its true wid me:)
ThanQ Sneha..:)
awwww wtg valli ;) wow
how can u write so nicely.. :)...very nice one...:D
Lucky..ThanQ :D
Kiran..ThanQ Kiran..:)
Hey, Hi
Well, the thoughts that you portrayed are beautiful, but i somehow feel the write up could have been better...
overall, nice...
super akka >:D<
Hello! I was here, asking for friendship. ;) Would you like to follow each others blogs? Advance Happy New Year. :D
The Silhouette
ThanQ :)
Keerthana
ThanQ :)
Hello Kristina
Happy new year
excellent one !!
I really hope that he survived that terrible accident. :(
Followed your blog back.
Ravi..ThanQ :)
Kristina :)
Awesome work..Truly <3
Aniqua
ThanQ dear...:)
awesome rhyme once again :)
Ordinary girl
Thank You :)
loved it :)
Chocolate lover ThanQ :)
WOW !!!
awesome... :-)Liked the rhyme.. how could u do that so smoothly... Keep it up.
Thanq Pranab :)
great one yr...
this one feels to be from deepest of heart... loved the emotions and and innocence u hv in writing.. feels alike mine.
Deepika...ThanQ so much..:)
hey...thanks a lot for following my blog!
this poem is really beautiful...
love your blog..happy new year! :)
The Delusional Beauty
ThanQ :)
Wish you a very Happy New Year..
good verses i liked them. poetry lovers find a welcome place here.
Jpdas...ThanQ :)
Wow.. dis is a gud poem.. :) 1 of d best in urs.. ;)
ThanQ Madhumathi..:)
very nice! keep it up. peace and love from south africa
Yakattack
Thank you..:)
Very Pure and delicate!! Loved it!!
Thanks for the read Sridhar, Manasa :)
True.. Sometimes, dreams are better than reality.. but it is nice to have them and not think of reality too :) Maybe thats why they're so beautiful...
Yeah true Leo..Thanks for the read :)
keep strong.. :D
hello valli,
I would really like to congratulate your for a blog which is to me, the best blog on the entire web. Your blog serves my various needs.....it is a music player when I am working on something or drafting those boring documents on word. It is a counsellor when I am depressed and my place to learn the art of writing ! thank you soo much for making this blog an integral part of my cyber life and I really do hope that I may learn from ur exceptional skills