Wednesday, February 24, 2010

Can words replace feelings?

(Photo by Little Heart Archu)

Can words replace feelings?
When I am left all alone
in the place unknown

Can words replace feelings?
When I am insulted in the crowd
with harsh words spoken aloud

Can words replace feelings?
When I stand on the stage
with nervous face

Can words replace feelings?
When success greets me with smile
which left me for a while

Can words replace feelings?
When my granny pampers me as I lie in her lap
and her arms around me and she tightly wraps

Can words replace feelings?
When my little bro hugs me from behind
and speak sweet words that are kind

Can words replace feelings?
When I met an old friend after many years
With whom I shared all fears and cheers

Can words replace feelings?
When I spent cold and lonely nights
Thinking about all those sad fights

Can words replace feelings?
When I burst into tears
that never quietens my fears

Can words replace feelings?
When I miss a person whom I adore very much
and with whom for many days I lost in touch

Can words replace feelings?
When I don't know what to do
when unexpected things happen, And the reason is you!

Words can never replace feelings
Those feelings having deeper meanings

Some feelings are beyond the usage of words
which strike our heart with golden swords...

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Jyothi said...

Very true Valli.....
Some feelings can never be replaced with words....

My frd has asked this very question in a different way and ever since I have always tried to pursue(with little or no success of course).

".....last 2 para's of this article."

I was just wondering if you have some answers.... if you have, feel free to share them either in that blog or anywhere in my blog..... You are welcome...


Valli said...

ThanQ Jyothi...:)

kiran said...

nice one.. :)

Valli said...

ThanQ Kiran

Fatima said...

True words can never replace feelings...feelings come directly from the heart! Words can misguide but feelings never !

Beautiful one !

Take Care,

P.S: If, you wish you could drop by my blog too....

Valli said...

ThanQ Fatima ^_^
I'll surely visit your blog

Ashitha said...

I love this one... awesome

deepak kripal said...

beautiful poem.. loved the end..

nice post..

Vineet Digga said...

but words are all we have, to tell them what if feel. wait, am wrong here, we don't need to 'tell' people how we feel. right? maybe. words will never replace feelings.

Meenakshi Malhotra said...

This one must go into your best works, Valli. Adorable and longing. Language is so inadequate to convey the whole gamut of emotions. rightly put!

Panchali said...

Very beautiful lines and words can never replace feelings. Let me share a quote...
“The best and most beautiful things in the world cannot be seen or even touched. They must be felt with the heart”
― Helen Keller

Lovely piece, Valli.

Debopam said...

Nice thought and wonderful composition....

Aryaansh Sood said...

Can word replace feelings....??
as i am spell bound by your blog...:)

Anonymous said...

How can those words ever replace feelings?? feelings, which sometimes ooze out as tears and sometimes wrap up itself in a tight hug and then sometimes a feeling of pain hidden in a smile, how could these be expressed using mere worldly words.
However, your words have spoken much. I loved your creation. :)

Please visit mine:

Thank you! :)

Anjan Roy said...

Human have made great scientific development but till today...he could not device any thing which could measure feelings,happiness,sorrows...and various other emotions...and as such there's no step or procedure to know the exactness of these feelings and thus there no words ever spoken in any language of the world which can acutely describe the feelings of a person.

sathish kumar said...

aha! Masterful...

TTT said...

lovely poem valli ...yeah words can never replace feelings !!

KavyaClassic said...

Wahhh...Loved it :)


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