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Why do relations break?
Why do we feel that love is fake?
When ego and pride
rise from the place they hide,
suppress our true feelings inside
and spread themselves wide
We see things with our eyes
rather than with our heart
that leads to illusions
and throws the actual truth apart
We act crookedly wise
never try to compromise
We do not try to forgive mistakes
as if we are perfect in our ways
We will not accept the person
the way they are
We try to change them, mold them
according to our wishes, that finally leaves a scar!
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Akka... good poem ! :)
Thanx Madhu..:)
Super akka....short and sorted..!..;)
Raviee..
ThanQ bro!
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I love the article....
But sometimes,
Relations break just because they never existed, rather had an illusion of existence...
Jyothi
ThanQ Jyothi....
Loved your lines too!
Sometimes relations break if they are not meant to be but many a times due to the underlying ego!
Nice poem...lovely :)
Take Care.
Very true Fatima...thanks for the read
Hi Valli That is absolutely true. Thats what happening in many ones lives now a days. Hope at least the people who understand this might not behave like that.
Thanks Telugu :)
and even I hope so :)
Hi Valli,
Yes, correctly stated. Most of the relationships break due to these reasons. We must learn to accommodate and adjust in order to lead a life with another soul. Merry Christmas. :)
Regards
Jay
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Everyone seems to have a clear idea of how our partner should lead their life, instead of his/her own. So very true, the ego and the pride. simple and nicely penned, Valli.
Yea, we see things with eyes not through hearts. Beautiful!
lovely lines.... :)
woah. how do you write so many great poems? teach meee pleaseee.
so true really
if an individual just improve them self they will never face such a situation
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true... perfect
A very good poem. Thank you.
Beautiful! :)
we all need an answer for it