Tuesday, September 03, 2013

Silver moon






(Image taken from here)

Crying child; Mom brings
moon to earth using mirror
Tears stop rolling!


Written for Haiku Heights



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Jyoti Mishra said...

Somehow mums always know all the ways of appeasement :)

Panchali said...

Ahhh...blissful! :) Where are you, Valli?? Miss u...glad I caught your poem today!

a Rat said...

this is so sweet. mom's tricks. loved it. :)

Reading Pleasure said...

Very original

Sumana Roy said...


aww so sweet...nice haiku :)

Saru Singhal said...

This is so beautiful! What a heavenly feeling!

Ankur Anand said...

nice

Ramesh Sood said...

Very beautiful Haiku..Valli.. My mom often brought it to me through her eyes..

RS:)

Micah said...

Amazing work as always didi. Never cease to awe me with your sheer simplicity.

zunnur said...

Beautiful memories of childhood

Athenas Take said...

Just a small gesture can bring happiness into the child's life and who can do this best- mommy dearest. Nice post.

Jiggyasa said...

very good attempt

Indrani said...

Three little lines, lovely writing.

Sreesha said...

So sweet :)

Simran said...

awww,,sho cute :-)

asteria's canvass said...

awww, thats a new one as far as moon is concerned.. :)

Paresh Kale said...

What an idea !

ANJALI.N.KUMAR said...

sweet one dear! memories!

Satya said...

Reminds me of my childhood days..
And my dear amma :)

Very sweet post :)

Rahul Bhatia said...

It truly happens:) Nice one Valli:)

cifar shayar said...

wonderful,that's an innocent haiku

Shruthy Haridas said...

awwwww...so sweet.luved this :)

Ph_ said...

deep thought precisely put into words, beautiful :)

Apurva said...

lovely.

 

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