Friday, February 01, 2013

College memory - 55 words (not fiction)






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“Both! Come here! Get your observations signed!” sir called us. “Where is your place? Why aren’t you doing experiment with your batch?” he asked “I went there to borrow pencil Sir” I replied while he was correcting. Amused when I saw ‘Not doing the experiment!’ remark along with his sign. “Schools were better!” I thought.

P.s. I don't write prose often, this is my first attempt on writing a story in 55 words. Your suggestions or feedback are most welcome





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Tarang Sinha said...

I think writing 55 fiction is difficult & challenging. Nice one for a first attempt! School days were of course better!:)

craftisland said...

Very good attempt....you must write prose also.

Saru Singhal said...

Yeah, school days are better, more carefree. Sweet read Valli :)

Brad Dugg said...

nice one valli gaaru baagaa raasaaru in 55 words keep it up

Siny U K Nair said...

Good job and since u r at inception I think u have done justice :)

Vishal Rathod said...

good one Valli . write these more often .

Jay Singh said...

Hi Valli,

I would say childhood was even better than school days. No tensions :)
keep up the good work Valli, you're only going to get better at it. :)

Regards

Jay
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Sabyasachi Patra | Tales from Wild India said...

Reminds me of the flirting college days when on the pretext of borrowing a pen or pencil one used to move to the other group. :)

Mixi said...

Yes, school was so much better

Bushra said...

Hi Valli,
Nice write up:) A smiley for you *:)* and a *thumbs up* for school life:)

Fayaz Pasha said...

College days, School days, Golden life anyways!

Shalini Samuel said...

Hi valli good try and you have done it well :)I have a doubt, did u say abot life in engineering college ;) I felt it happened in my life..

a Rat said...

haha schools were better lol :-) interesting, Valli.. even i had similar thought process during my first year.. 55 fiction..you're good andyou should try your hands more often at it too..

Ramya said...

CUTE :D reminds of everybody's college life isnt it :D?

Panchali said...

Lovely...school days were so innocent. Nicely penned...keep writing prose as well, valli.

deepak kripal said...

Very unique. You should come up with more Valli.. very nice.

Saurabh Chawla said...

I guess 55 word fiction can best be written when it relates to real life incident. Nice one :)

 

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