Tuesday, September 25, 2012

Life of paper boat....






(Photo by Eredel)

Soaked paper boat drowns
with pride, Happy being cause
for many broad smiles

:)        :)         :)

Life of paper boat
so short! But, it echoes joy
that forever lasts!



Written for Haiku Heights



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Rahul Bhatia said...

Paper boats are sheer Joy!

Vinay Prajapati said...

Nice, keep writing... :)

Anupam Patra said...

True to the core, Valli. Exquisite depiction

AmitAag said...

Wow! what a thought! Very nice, Valli:)

vinay said...

Beautiful and meaningful. :)

Ranita Sinha said...

Touched the heart Valli..many memories refreshed..liked it very much..

Green Speck said...

Lovely 2nd stanza ... a paper boat always brings smile to our faces ... well done !!!

Jay Singh said...

Good haiku Valli :)
The lines evoke the memories of paper boats made in childhood :)
Keep posting :D


Regards

Jay
http://road-to-sanitarium.blogspot.in/

Ghazala Hossain said...

Absolutely lovely lines. Hugs :D

Panchali said...

well honed words
adding meaning
at various levels...lovely, Valli!

Naive Chocoholic. said...

Paper boats! <3 :) :) :)

TTT said...

Oh the joy of making paper boats !!!!

Tarang Sinha said...

This is sweet!:)

Locomente said...

Second haiku is lovely...

Rajey Sha राजे_शा said...

beautifull emotions...

Kathy Donlan said...

"drowns with pride" . . .unique take. I like it.

Ashitha said...

it is beautiful and profound.. good work :)

poetry-diary.com said...

I think you have caught the essence of paperboats in these haiku. Very nice.

Ellecee said...

Your words are so true, a lovely description of paper boats and the joy they bring.

awalkinmyheart said...

The life of your paper boat makes me smile.

odyzz said...

beautiful!!! :)

jaish_vats said...

Wow!

Pranita said...

Indeedy!!! Well done Valli :)
:

My paperboat, sails in your heart!

Dulcina said...

Sad and hopeful at the same time; I like "echoes joy that forever lasts".
About the short life of paper boats, I still keep one my grandma made for me many years ago, one of my treasures (I haven't put it in water!)
:)

Barbara said...

Lovely! A trip down memory lane to childhood!! Joyful!

Reading Pleasure said...

A lovely set

Vishnu Keloth said...

Beautiful!!!

rigzin said...

..words are few..but very very powerful..
..keep it up Valli..loved it.. :)

Shesha Chaturvedi said...

Thats a very thoughtful poem! Deep!

S said...

So much pink bubbling everywhere, I feel like I've entered my niece's room..!! :D

Nice words..!!

Saru Singhal said...

Both verses are beautiful but combined together they are on another level.

We Cognize said...

Yes it is, and the boats have to sail together. Those which get wet in the rains will need a helping hand :)

Magical Mystical Teacher said...

I'm glad that there is a lasting echo to the paper boat that was lost long ago...


Paper Boat

Hazel said...

Lovely take of the prompt, and so true of paper boats.

vinishashah said...

That's damn beautiful valli :):)

Harisankar said...

Vallikutty..Just loved ths one..:)

Raj said...

Wow.. simply brilliant lines. :)Indeed the paper boat has a short and sweet life and in that short lifetime, it gives us a happy moment. Lovely poetry! :)

D.Nambiar said...

Lovely lines(so true also), Lovely picture too. :)

indiwriter said...

Paper boats are so iconic. Lovely photo..

Sri Valli said...

Thanks for the read Everyone :)

Anonymous said...

nice one

 

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